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Copy edit OnboardCellularInterface.h
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features/netsocket/cellular/generic_modem_driver/OnboardCellularInterface.h

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@@ -43,31 +43,31 @@ class OnboardCellularInterface : public UARTCellularInterface {
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/** Sets the modem up for powering on
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*
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* modem_init() is equivalent to plugging in the device, e.g., attaching power and serial port.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the implementation of onboard_modem_api is provided by the target.
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* modem_init() is equivalent to plugging in the device, for example, attaching power and serial port.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the target provides the implementation of onboard_modem_api.
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*/
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virtual void modem_init();
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/** Sets the modem in unplugged state
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*
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* modem_deinit() will be equivalent to pulling the plug off of the device, i.e., detaching power
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* modem_deinit() will be equivalent to pulling the plug off of the device, in other words, detaching power
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* and serial port. This puts the modem in lowest power state.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the implementation of onboard_modem_api is provided by the target.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the target provides the implementation of onboard_modem_api.
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*/
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virtual void modem_deinit();
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/** Powers up the modem
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*
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* modem_power_up() is equivalent to pressing the soft power button.
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* The driver may repeat this if the modem is not responsive to AT commands.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the implementation of onboard_modem_api is provided by the target.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the target provides the implementation of onboard_modem_api.
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virtual void modem_power_up();
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/** Powers down the modem
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* modem_power_down() is equivalent to turning off the modem by button press.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the implementation of onboard_modem_api is provided by the target.
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* Uses onboard_modem_api.h where the target provides the implementation of onboard_modem_api.
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*/
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virtual void modem_power_down();
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};

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