Minor scene edits

Author: AWSWCommunity

mods/anna_post_true/__init__.py

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ def mod_load(self):
         golab = ml.findlabel("post_true_main") # Getting the label from our additive code. 
         posttruehook = ml.endingHooks.hookPostTrueEnding(golab) # If we wanted, we could have a scene play post true ending, after credits, but before the return to main_menu. 
 
-        NoFunAllowed = False # Set this to true if you don't feel like playing through the true ending to watch the scene.
+        NoFunAllowed = True # Set this to true if you don't feel like playing through the true ending to watch the scene.
         if NoFunAllowed:       
             tocompile = """
             screen dummy:

mods/anna_post_true/adine_rpy_scene.rpy

@@ -175,4 +175,10 @@ label adine_post_true_entry:
             Ad "I'm sure it will."
 
 
-    m "She stepped back and glanced down at the key in my hand, then at my front door."
+    m "She stepped back and glanced down at the key in my hand, then at my front door."
+    
+    stop music fadeout 4.0
+    play sound "fx/door/handle.wav"
+    $ renpy.pause(1.0)
+    scene black with fade
+    $ renpy.pause(4.0)

mods/anna_post_true/bryce_rpy_scene.rpy

@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ label bryce_post_true_entry:
             c "I think we drank the last bottle the other night. "
             $ bryce_post_mood += 1
 
-    Br "Although, maybe not. Hell, I can go without drinking for one night. We both know I drink too much. I know you know too, even if you're too polite to say anything. You were right earlier, when you asked if people at my job noticed. Once you said that, I started paying attention. Whenever someone mentioned alcohol, they'd look in my direction. I just never paid attention before."
+    Br "Although, maybe not. Hell, I can go without drinking for one night. We both know I drink too much. I know you know too, even if you're too polite to say anything."
+    Br "You were right earlier, when you asked if people at my job noticed. Once you said that, I started paying attention. Whenever someone mentioned alcohol, they'd look in my direction. I just never paid attention before."
     c "I can't tell you what to do."
     m "The dragon looked at me and for a second it looked like he was going to ask me something but was too ashamed. So I asked him what I thought he was thinking."
     c "Are there any programs or groups that help people deal with this here?"
@@ -67,16 +68,19 @@ label bryce_post_true_entry:
             Br "Building that model ship helped. At first I found it frustrating that I couldn't keep my claws steady or see the tiny stupid parts. But if I was sober, I could just barely do it, so it's a good excuse not to drink."
 
     m "He was silent for a while and I could tell he was deep in thought. For the first time, I wondered how old he was. If he had hair it would surely be graying."
-    Br "But it's the only thing that helps. Sometimes it's the only way to keep the dreams away. You don't know what it's like, dealing with what I had to deal with every day. I deal with the worst that "
+    Br "But it's the only thing that helps. Sometimes it's the only way to keep the dreams away. You don't know what it's like, dealing with what I had to deal with every day."
+    Br "I deal with the worst that dragonkind has to offer. I see murderers, thieves and rapists. Drug overdoses and suicides. Nearly every day."
 
     menu:
         "You're right.":
             c "I've only been here a week and I've seen only a few crimes."
 
         "Actually, I do know what it's like.":
-            c "My world isn't like this. We don't have pretty little towns where everyone knows each other and gets along. We have one city and it's walled off, and if it wasn't, people would come in, steal everything we have, and kill everyone they met. I've seen people murdered in the streets for their shoes. I've seen families kill one of their children and eat it so the others could survive."
+            c "My world isn't like this. We don't have pretty little towns where everyone knows each other and gets along. We have one city and it's walled off, and if it wasn't, people would come in, steal everything we have, and kill everyone they met."
+            c "I've seen people murdered in the streets for their shoes. I've seen families kill one of their children and eat it so the others could survive."
             Br "Damn, [player_name], I'm sorry. I didn't know. I mean I knew it was bad, but not that bad."
-            c "Nobody does. If we really told everyone how bad it was, your people could take advantage of us. That's why we need those generators. Something as simple as electricity makes a world of difference in a world where we have useful, lifesaving technology lying around but nothing to power it with."
+            c "Nobody does. If we really told everyone how bad it was, your people could take advantage of us."
+            c "That's why we need those generators. Something as simple as electricity makes a world of difference in a world where we have useful, lifesaving technology lying around but nothing to power it with."
 
     Br "I guess your people really do need our help, then."
     c "We do. An experienced police chief would be an extremely valuable asset to us. Even without your experience, a dragon like yourself is strong enough to help with manual labour."
@@ -95,7 +99,9 @@ label bryce_post_true_entry:
         "Lorem.":
             c "I know Lorem was working on a story about humans, and he wanted my input. I thought I could use him to influence dragonkind's perception of humans however I wanted."
 
-        "Nobody but you."
+        "Nobody but you.":
+            pass
+            
 
     c "I'll make sure you'll be allowed through the portal. You're useful enough. The only limitation is mass, so you won't be able to bring much with you"
     Br flirty "Can I bring my Fun Basket?"

mods/anna_post_true/remy_rpy_scene.rpy

@@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ label remy_post_true_entry:
     $ renpy.pause(1.0)
     show remy normal with dissolve
     Ry normal "When you go back in time, how far back can you go?"
-    c "Only as far back as when the Portal was built. And I would need to know the spacetime coordinates of that location."
-    Ry "What do you mean, coordinates? Does the Portal move?"
+    c "Only as far back as when the portal was built. And I would need to know the spacetime coordinates of that location."
+    Ry "What do you mean, coordinates? Does the portal move?"
     c "Yes, in spacetime. The Earth itself is moving, so if you went back or forward in time to this location, you'd end up floating in space."
     Ry "I see. Is there anyway of finding out the coordinates of a given date?"
-    c "Probably, that's how they sent me back here in the first place. But I don't know how. The first time, the coordinates were loaded into the Portal's computer before I arrived, and every time after that, Izumi loaded it."
+    c "Probably, that's how they sent me back here in the first place. But I don't know how. The first time, the coordinates were loaded into the portal's computer before I arrived, and every time after that, Izumi loaded it."
     Ry "The dragon nodded. He looked like he was deep in thought. His front claw wandered to his tie and gently touched it."
 
     menu:
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ label remy_post_true_entry:
 
         "You'll just have to deal with the present now.":
             c "If you can go back as many times as you 	want, what's the value in the present moment? Why bother doing anything if you can just go 	back and redo it?"
-            Ry "I supposed that's true, in a way."
+            Ry "I suppose that's true, in a way."
             c "It's what I've learned. I don't know how many times I've met you for the first time. After a while the experience is diminished."
 
     c "I know what you're thinking but it's just not worth it."
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ label remy_post_true_entry:
     Ry "..."
     c "You can't change the past, Remy. I wish I could help you bring her back, but you can't. If we went back that far, it would completely destabilize this timeline and all the work I've done here, all the hundreds of deaths I've died, would be for nothing. I'm sorry, but she's gone and you'll never get her back."
     Ry normal "I could at least try."
-    c "In one timeline, Vara died. She snuck out and followed us to the Portal and was shot by Reza. I don't even know what I did to prevent that this time. "
-    c "If we went back to save your fiancee, you might not have been there to greet me when I came out of the Portal. Then I'd never met you and I never would have had a reason to help you go back and save her. Major changes like that can cause paradoxes we don't even understand."
+    c "In one timeline, Vara died. She snuck out and followed us to the portal and was shot by Reza. I don't even know what I did to prevent that this time. "
+    c "If we went back to save your fiancee, you might not have been there to greet me when I came out of the portal. Then I'd never met you and I never would have had a reason to help you go back and save her. Major changes like that can cause paradoxes we don't even understand."
     Ry "I suppose you're right, of course."
     c "She must have really been something for you to care so much."
     Ry "She was. I can't describe her in words. Even trying would be an injustice to her. I could quote a song or recite a poem but it wouldn't describe what I felt when I saw her. But I don't want to bore you with that."