Merge pull request #4 from Lykayos/post_true

Skimmed Grammar and Spelling : anna_post_true

Author: AWSWCommunity

mods/anna_post_true/anna_rpy_scene.rpy

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ label anna_post_true_entry:
     $ renpy.pause (1.0)
 
     # 'm' is the narrator character. This makes a text box with no name appear on the screen. 
-    m "The last few hours felt like a dream, or a memory of a dream I had many times before. Reza was dead, and both worlds were safe - for now. No doubt it would all make sense in the morning but now I just wanted to get home and get some rest. Anna and I walked back to town from the portal, together. "
+    m "The last few hours felt like a dream or a memory of a dream I had many times before. Reza was dead, and both worlds were safe - for now. No doubt it would all make sense in the morning but now I just wanted to get home and get some rest. Anna and I walked back to town from the portal, together. "
     show anna normal with dissolve # The show instruction, well, shows a character. See images.rpy in the AWSW code for the whole list (you'll need these).
     $ renpy.pause(0.5)
     An "What are you going to do now?" # An is the identifier for anna's character object. Once again, defined in images.rpy. This is a Say instruction.
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@ label anna_post_true_entry:
     m "She was trying her best to sound sarcastic but I saw a smirk on her scaly lips."
     c "I guess you will."
     An normal "I don't know what I'll do. I still don't know if I'll be pardoned. I know what Bryce said, but he can only do so much if the courts decide I'm guilty."
-    c "I don't think they'll arrest you. You may have broke the law, but it was for the greater good. Not everyone can see that, but I think enough people will."
-    An "It would be ironic to be stuck in prison while a comet hits."
+    c "I don't think they'll arrest you. You may have broken the law, but it was for the greater good. Not everyone can see that, but I think enough people will."
+    An "It would be ironic to be stuck in prison while a comet hit."
     m "Her expression changed, like the full realization of what she just said hit her."
     An sad "Are you really sure it will happen?"
 
@@ -58,10 +58,10 @@ label anna_post_true_entry:
     An smirk "Same here."
     m "I thought about something that had been bugging me for the last few days."
 
-    c "Seriously. Sneaking on to that farm and eating freshly-killed meat was the best first date I've ever been on. But the night we spent together... that wasn't just a one-off thing, was it? Were you just looking to do something spontaneous or did you really want to?"
+    c "Seriously. Sneaking onto that farm and eating freshly-killed meat was the best first date I've ever been on. But the night we spent together... that wasn't just a one-off thing, was it? Were you just looking to do something spontaneous or did you really want to?"
 
     # Change Anna's expression back to normal, otherwise the previously set one would persist. 
-    An normal "If I'm going to be honest it was a bit of both. There was just so much going on at that point I don't think I was in my right mind. It was spontaneous, but I don't regret it. Do you?"
+    An normal "If I'm going to be honest, it was a bit of both. There was just so much going on at that point I don't think I was in my right mind. It was spontaneous, but I don't regret it. Do you?"
 
     # 'c' is the MC. 
     c "No. The idea would have been unthinkable when I arrived here a week ago. But now, getting to know you... I don't know. But I'm just wondering, isn't that sort of thing frowned upon here? What would people think?"
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ label anna_post_true_entry:
     menu:
         "I guess you're right.": 
             c "I guess you're right. It doesn't matter."
-            An "If anything, they'd be jealous. Remember, humans are worshipped in our society. A week ago, humans were mythical creatures, and now, a few dozen people have met you."
+            An "If anything, they'd be jealous. Remember, humans are worshiped in our society. A week ago, humans were mythical creatures, and now, a few dozen people have met you."
             c "And now, one person even gets to date me."
             An smirk "And that person is very lucky, indeed."
         "But I represent humanity as a whole.":
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ label anna_post_true_entry:
             c "Of course not, Anna, I would never lie about something like that. I'm on an important mission, so I can't just do whatever I want, or be with the people I like."
 
     # The game skips to here after running all the choice-specific instructions. 
-    An face "I'm not a fan of politics, if you haven't noticed. It's just a group of people trying to guess what everyone else wants, and at the same time, lying about what they themselves want. When you first came here I thought you'd be like one of {i}them{/i}. A selfish, corrupt bureaucrat. But..."
+    An face "I'm not a fan of politics if you haven't noticed. It's just a group of people trying to guess what everyone else wants, and at the same time, lying about what they themselves want. When you first came here I thought you'd be like one of {i}them{/i}. A selfish, corrupt bureaucrat. But..."
     An smirk "...you're different."
     m "She made a warm, honest smile that was infectious. It was an expression I had seen on her face all too rarely."
     c "I guess I was just able to see something that others didn't."
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ label anna_post_true_entry:
     c "But in the end, it wasn't a political decision. It was an emotional one. I chose to be with you because I like you. I saw something in you, something that I don't think others do. Something that I don't think even you saw."
     An normal "What did you see?"
     m "The dragon stepped close to me. Her eyes were wide and I could see the row of streetlights in them, glowing faintly like a line of fireflies. Her eyes were filled with something I hadn't seen in them before: hope. The words gushed out before I knew they were coming."
-    c "I saw potential. That you could be something great, if only somebody could show you. I thought that person could be me. You're brilliant and skilled, but hopelessly independent and stubborn. You know how people underestimate you, but I think you underestimate yourself."
+    c "I saw potential. That you could be something great if only somebody could show you. I thought that person could be me. You're brilliant and skilled, but hopelessly independent and stubborn. You know how people underestimate you, but I think you underestimate yourself."
     c "You're going to change the world, Anna, if only you believe in yourself and realize your true potential. But you won't get far without someone to support you. I thought I could help you. You're a better friend than any I've met here, and I thought you might become even more. Do you think it... do you think {i}we{/i} could happen?" 
 
     scene np4 with dissolve