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_data/benefits.yml

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 - title: Internship Opportunities*
   image: opportunities.svg
-  description: Last year, students who completed program requirements received internships to companies such as GitHub, Microsoft, Red Hat, Fidelity, Cisco and Intel. This year we’re adding even more companies and expanding opportunities to intern at startups, nonprofits, and within open source communities.
+  description: Apply for exclusive internship opportunities with companies such as GitHub, Microsoft, Red Hat, Fidelity, Cisco,  Intel, and many more companies, startups, nonprofits, and open source communities as our list of partners and the opportunities available to you expands.
 
 - title: Education
   image: education.svg
-  description: Free access to open source courses and training curriculum.
+  description: Advance your technical skills with free access to open source courses and training curriculum.
 
 - title: Technical Training
   image: training.svg
-  description: Participate in virtual and in-person hackathons.
+  description: Gain hands-on experience through virtual and in-person hackathons.
 
 - title: Career Development
   image: careers.svg
   description: Receive individual resume reviews, mock interviews, and more! Learn about team communication, how to leverage employee resource groups, and other key development topics.
 
 - title: Swag
   image: swag.svg
-  description: All In and partner-branded hoodies, t-shirts, socks, backpacks, and swag galore!
+  description: Proudly wear your All In or partner-branded hoodies, t-shirts, socks, backpacks, and other swag you’ll receive by participating.
+
 
 - title: Scholarships
   image: scholarships.svg
-  description: Opportunities to apply for funding to attend bootcamps, conferences and participate in fellowships throughout the year.
+  description: Access opportunities to apply for funding to attend bootcamps, conferences and participate in fellowships throughout the year.
 
 - title: Mentoring & Networking
   image: networking.svg

_data/faq.yml

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 - question: Does the program accept students in their senior year?
-  answer: Yes.  However, our corporate partners typically are seeking summer interns rather than full time employees. For Summer 2023, seniors who are still seeking employment may be placed in positions with open source communities to receive technical skills post graduation.
+  answer: Yes. However, our corporate partners typically seek summer interns rather than full-time employees. For Summer 2023, seniors seeking employment may be placed in positions with open-source communities to receive technical skills post-graduation.
 
 - question: Do students have to be computer science majors?
   answer: No.  One of the great benefits of open source is that you can pursue a degree in any major and still succeed!  However, we ask that students complete at least one programming course and have shown dedication and a passion for working in tech.