[NFC][LLDB] Clean up comments/some code in MinidumpFileBuilder (llvm#134961)

I've recently been working on Minidump File Builder again, and some of
the comments are out of date, and many of the includes are no longer
used. This patch removes unneeded includes and rephrases some comments
to better fit with the current state after the read write chunks pr.

Author: Jlalond

lldb/source/Plugins/ObjectFile/Minidump/MinidumpFileBuilder.cpp

@@ -41,14 +41,9 @@
 
 #include <algorithm>
 #include <cinttypes>
-#include <climits>
 #include <cstddef>
 #include <cstdint>
-#include <functional>
-#include <iostream>
-#include <set>
 #include <utility>
-#include <vector>
 
 using namespace lldb;
 using namespace lldb_private;
@@ -879,8 +874,8 @@ Status MinidumpFileBuilder::AddMemoryList() {
   // We apply a generous padding here so that the Directory, MemoryList and
   // Memory64List sections all begin in 32b addressable space.
   // Then anything overflow extends into 64b addressable space.
-  // All core memeroy ranges will either container nothing on stacks only
-  // or all the memory ranges including stacks
+  // all_core_memory_vec will either contain all stack regions at this point,
+  // or be empty if it's a stack only minidump.
   if (!all_core_memory_vec.empty())
     total_size += 256 + (all_core_memory_vec.size() *
                          sizeof(llvm::minidump::MemoryDescriptor_64));
@@ -924,9 +919,9 @@ Status MinidumpFileBuilder::DumpHeader() const {
   header.StreamDirectoryRVA =
       static_cast<llvm::support::ulittle32_t>(HEADER_SIZE);
   header.Checksum = static_cast<llvm::support::ulittle32_t>(
-      0u), // not used in most of the writers
-      header.TimeDateStamp =
-          static_cast<llvm::support::ulittle32_t>(std::time(nullptr));
+      0u); // not used in most of the writers
+  header.TimeDateStamp =
+      static_cast<llvm::support::ulittle32_t>(std::time(nullptr));
   header.Flags =
       static_cast<llvm::support::ulittle64_t>(0u); // minidump normal flag
 
@@ -987,10 +982,10 @@ Status MinidumpFileBuilder::ReadWriteMemoryInChunks(
                 current_addr, bytes_read, error.AsCString());
 
       // If we failed in a memory read, we would normally want to skip
-      // this entire region, if we had already written to the minidump
+      // this entire region. If we had already written to the minidump
       // file, we can't easily rewind that state.
       //
-      // So if we do encounter an error while reading, we just return
+      // So if we do encounter an error while reading, we return
       // immediately, any prior bytes read will still be included but
       // any bytes partially read before the error are ignored.
       return lldb_private::IterationAction::Stop;
@@ -1069,7 +1064,7 @@ MinidumpFileBuilder::AddMemoryList_32(std::vector<CoreFileMemoryRange> &ranges,
       return error;
 
     // If we completely failed to read this range
-    // we can just omit any of the book keeping.
+    // we can drop the memory range
     if (bytes_read == 0)
       continue;
 
@@ -1209,12 +1204,7 @@ MinidumpFileBuilder::AddMemoryList_64(std::vector<CoreFileMemoryRange> &ranges,
 }
 
 Status MinidumpFileBuilder::AddData(const void *data, uint64_t size) {
-  // This should also get chunked, because worst case we copy over a big
-  // object / memory range, say 5gb. In that case, we'd have to allocate 10gb
-  // 5 gb for the buffer we're copying from, and then 5gb for the buffer we're
-  // copying to. Which will be short lived and immedaitely go to disk, the goal
-  // here is to limit the number of bytes we need to host in memory at any given
-  // time.
+  // Append the data to the buffer, if the buffer spills over, flush it to disk
   m_data.AppendData(data, size);
   if (m_data.GetByteSize() > MAX_WRITE_CHUNK_SIZE)
     return FlushBufferToDisk();