Merge pull request ceph#63875 from zdover23/wip-doc-2025-06-11-mgr-telemetry-63826-followup

doc/mgr: edit telemetry.rst

Author: anthonyeleven

doc/mgr/telemetry.rst

@@ -312,8 +312,7 @@ command:
    ceph telemetry send
 
 If telemetry has not been enabled (by running the command ``ceph telemetry
-on``), you need to add ``--license sharing-1-0`` to the ``ceph telemetry send``
-command.
+on``), add ``--license sharing-1-0`` to the ``ceph telemetry send`` command.
 
 Sending telemetry through a proxy
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