Further improvements.

Author: madeline-underwood

content/learning-paths/laptops-and-desktops/windows_armpl/1-first-vs-project.md

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-title: Create a Windows on Arm application
+title: Create and Run a Windows on Arm application
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 ## Create and configure a project
 
-You are now ready to create a Windows on Arm application.
+You are now ready to create a Windows on Arm application. For your first project, you will create a simple console application.
 
-For your first project, you will create a simple console application.
+The next steps will guide you through how to create and configure your project.
 
-As shown in Figure 1, go to the **Start** window, and select **Create a new project**.  
+Begin by going to the **Start** window, and selecting **Create a new project**. See Figure 1.  
 
 ![vs_new_proj1.png alt-text#center](./figures/vs_new_proj1.png "Figure 1: Create a new project.")
 
-Then, as shown in Figure 2, in **Configure your new project**, do the following:
+Then, in **Configure your new project**, do the following:
 
 * Select **Console App**.
-* Provide a project name, such as `ConsoleApp1`.
+* Provide a project name, such as `ConsoleApp1`, as Figure 2 shows.
 * Click **Create**.
 
 ![img2 alt-text#center](./figures/vs_new_proj2.png "Figure 2: Configure your new project.")
@@ -34,30 +34,30 @@ int main()
 }
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-Whilst Microsoft Visual Studio automatically configures the build environment for the hardware of the CPU architecture, you will still benefit from familiarizing yourself with the relevant configuration settings and learning what to use. Continue to learn more about the configuration settings.
+Whilst Microsoft Visual Studio automatically configures the build environment for the hardware of the CPU architecture, you still benefit from familiarizing yourself with the relevant configuration settings. So continue to learn more about how to get set up.
 
 ## ARM64 Configuration Settings
 
-Click on the **Debug** drop-down menu, and select **Configuration Manager...**
+Now click on the **Debug** drop-down menu, and select **Configuration Manager...** 
 
  ![img4 alt-text#center](./figures/vs_console_config1.png "Figure 3: Select Configuration Manager.")
 
 
-In the **Project contexts** area, you will see the platform set to `ARM64`. 
+In the **Project contexts** area, you will see the platform set to `ARM64`, as Figure 4 shows. 
 
  ![img5 alt-text#center](./figures/vs_console_config2.png "Figure 4: Project Contexts Menu.")
 
-Click **Build**, then **Build Solution**, and your application will compile.
+Now click **Build**, then **Build Solution**, and your application will compile.
 
 ## Run your first Windows on Arm application
 
 Use the green arrow to run the program you compiled, and you will see the print statement from your code correctly executed in the console.
 
  ![img6 alt-text#center](./figures/vs_console_exe.png "Figure 5: The Console.")
 
-You can also use the tools provided by Visual Studio to check the compiled executable.
+You can also use the tools that Visual Studio provides to check the compiled executable.
 
-The [dumpbin](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/cpp/build/reference/dumpbin-reference?view=msvc-170) command-line tool is included with Microsoft Visual Studio. You can use it to analyze binary files such as:
+Visual Studio includes the command-line tool [dumpbin](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/cpp/build/reference/dumpbin-reference?view=msvc-170), and you can use it to analyze binary files such as:
 
 * Executable files (.exe).
 * Object files (.obj).
@@ -77,4 +77,4 @@ You can see that the file format shows `AA64 machine (ARM64)` in the file header
 
  ![img7 alt-text#center](./figures/vs_checkmachine.jpeg "Figure 6: AA64 Machine in File Header.")
 
-Continue to the next page to build and run a more computation-intensive application.
+Continue to the next page to get set up with Git before you move on to build and run a more computationally-intensive application.

content/learning-paths/laptops-and-desktops/windows_armpl/2a-get-set-up-git.md

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 ## Install Git for Windows on Arm
 
-This section uses a sample application from GitHub to demonstrate the use of Arm Performance Libraries.
+This section uses an example application from GitHub to demonstrate the use of Arm Performance Libraries.
 
-Start by installing Git using the [Git Install Guide](/install-guides/git-woa/) for Windows on Arm.
+If you don't already have Git installed, start by installing Git using the [Git Install Guide](/install-guides/git-woa/) for Windows on Arm.
 
-## Clone the Sample from GitHub
+## Clone the Example from GitHub
 
-The sample application renders a rotating 3D cube to perform the calculations using different programming options.
+The example application renders a rotating 3D cube to perform the calculations using different programming options.
 
-First, navigate to an empty directory and clone the example repository from GitHub:
+First, navigate to an empty directory, and clone the repository containing the example from GitHub:
 
 ```cmd
 git clone https://github.com/odincodeshen/SpinTheCubeInGDI.git
 ```
 
 {{% notice Note %}}
-The sample repository is forked from the [original GitHub repository](https://github.com/marcpems/SpinTheCubeInGDI) with some modifications for demonstration purposes.
+The repository containing the example is forked from the [original GitHub repository for Spin the Cube](https://github.com/marcpems/SpinTheCubeInGDI) with some modifications for demonstration purposes.
 {{% /notice %}}
 

content/learning-paths/laptops-and-desktops/windows_armpl/3-apt-enhancement.md

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-## Introuducing Arm Performance Libraries
+## Introducing Arm Performance Libraries
 
 Now that you have seen the performance of multithreading, you can move on to deploying Arm Performance Libraries, and you can explore the differences. 
 

content/learning-paths/laptops-and-desktops/windows_armpl/_index.md

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 learning_objectives: 
     - Develop a Windows on Arm application using Microsoft Visual Studio.
-    - Utilize Arm Performance Libraries to optimize the performance of the application.
+    - Utilize Arm Performance Libraries to optimize the performance of an application.
 
 prerequisites:
     - A Windows on Arm computer such as the [Windows Dev Kit 2023](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/arm/dev-kit), or a Lenovo Thinkpad X13s running Windows 11.