Update find-hardware.md

Author: madeline-underwood

content/learning-paths/servers-and-cloud-computing/intro/find-hardware.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Server hardware, based on Arm Neoverse processors, is available from cloud servi
 
 ## Cloud Service Providers 
 
-Creating an account with a cloud service provider (CSPs) is the easiest way to get started with Arm. CSPs offer introductory free credits to start learning cloud services. A pay-as-you-go model makes it easy to try out Arm hardware at little to no cost. 
+Creating an account with a cloud service provider (CSP) is the easiest way to get started with Arm. CSPs offer introductory free credits to start learning cloud services. A pay-as-you-go model makes it easy to try out Arm hardware at little cost, if any. 
 
 Software developers often try Arm hardware as a way to reduce cost and improve application performance.
 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Cloud providers offer Arm instances based on Neoverse processors. For example:
 - [Scaleway](https://www.scaleway.com/en/cost-optimized-instances-based-on-arm/)
 - [Hetzner Cloud](https://www.hetzner.com/news/arm64-cloud)
 
-Free tier offers are currently available.
+Free tier offers are currently available:
 - [Amazon EC2 t4g.small instances powered by AWS Graviton2 processors are free until Dec 31st 2024](https://aws.amazon.com/ec2/instance-types/t4/)
 - [Oracle free tier includes up to 4 instances of ARM Ampere A1 Compute which are always free](https://www.oracle.com/cloud/free/)
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Below is a list of Arm cloud partners that have existing academic offers for stu
 
 ##  Arm SystemReady Certified hardware
 
-[Arm SystemReady](https://www.arm.com/architecture/system-architectures/systemready-certification-program) is a program that certifies that systems meet the SystemReady standards, giving confidence that operating systems (OS) and subsequent layers of software just work.
+[Arm SystemReady](https://www.arm.com/architecture/system-architectures/systemready-certification-program) is a program that certifies that systems meet the SystemReady standards, giving you confidence that operating systems (OS) and subsequent layers of software just work.
 
 You can find a full list of SystemReady SR Certified Systems on the [Arm website](https://www.arm.com/architecture/system-architectures/systemready-certification-program/sr) along with links to purchase Arm servers.
 
@@ -56,6 +56,6 @@ Servers typically run the Linux operating system. Popular distributions for serv
 
 If the GNU compiler is not pre-installed with your distribution, you can [install it using a package manager](/install-guides/gcc/native/).
 
-You may also wish to install [Arm Compiler for Linux](/install-guides/acfl/) for HPC applications.
+You can also install [Arm Compiler for Linux](/install-guides/acfl/) for HPC applications.
 
 [Migrating applications to Arm servers](/learning-paths/servers-and-cloud-computing/migration/) is a good place to start analyzing existing applications and reviewing guidance for developers interested in trying Arm hardware.