Android selfie LP review

Author: pareenaverma

content/learning-paths/smartphones-and-mobile/build-android-selfie-app-using-mediapipe-multimodality/2-app-scaffolding.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Scaffold a new Android project
+title: Create a new Android project
 weight: 2
 
 ### FIXED, DO NOT MODIFY
@@ -26,12 +26,12 @@ Before you proceed to coding, here are some tips that might come handy:
 
 ## Create a new Android project
 
-1. Navigate to **File > New > New Project...**.
+1. Navigate to File > New > New Project....
 
-2. Select **Empty Views Activity** in **Phone and Tablet** galary as shown below, then click **Next**.
+2. Select Empty Views Activity in the Phone and Tablet gallery as shown below, then click Next.
 ![Empty Views Activity](images/2/empty%20project.png)
 
-3. Proceed with a cool project name and default configurations as shown below. Make sure that **Language** is set to **Kotlin**, and that **Build configuration language** is set to **Kotlin DSL**.
+3. Enter a project name and use the default configurations as shown below. Make sure that Language is set to Kotlin, and that Build configuration language is set to Kotlin DSL.
 ![Project configuration](images/2/project%20config.png)
 
 ### Introduce CameraX dependencies
@@ -194,4 +194,4 @@ private fun bindCameraUseCases() {
     }
 ```
 
-In the next chapter, we will build and run the app to make sure the camera works well.
+In the next section, you will build and run the app to make sure the camera works well.

content/learning-paths/smartphones-and-mobile/build-android-selfie-app-using-mediapipe-multimodality/9-avoid-redundant-requests.md

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ However, silently failing without notifying the user is not a good practice for
 
 {{% /notice %}}
 
-## Completed sample code on GitHub
+## Entire sample code on GitHub
 
 If you run into any difficulties completing this learning path, you can check out the [complete sample code](https://github.com/hanyin-arm/sample-android-selfie-app-using-mediapipe-multimodality) and import it into Android Studio.
 

content/learning-paths/smartphones-and-mobile/build-android-selfie-app-using-mediapipe-multimodality/_index.md

@@ -1,14 +1,9 @@
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 title: Build a Hands-Free Selfie Android application with MediaPipe
 
-draft: true
-cascade:
-    draft: true
-
 minutes_to_complete: 120
 
-who_is_this_for: This is an advanced topic for mobile application developers interested in learning how to build an Androi
-d selfie app with MediaPipe, Kotlin flows and CameraX.
+who_is_this_for: This is an advanced topic for mobile application developers interested in learning how to build an Android selfie application with MediaPipe, Kotlin flows and CameraX.
 
 learning_objectives:
     - Architect a modern Android app with a focus on the UI layer.
@@ -21,8 +16,7 @@ prerequisites:
     - A development machine with [**Android Studio**](https://developer.android.com/studio) installed.
     - A recent Arm powered Android phone (with **front camera**) and a USB data cable.
     - Familiarity with Android development concepts.
-    - Basic knowledge of Kotlin programming language, such as [coroutines](https://kotlinlang.org/docs/coroutines-overview
-.html) and [flows](https://kotlinlang.org/docs/flow.html).
+    - Basic knowledge of Kotlin programming language.
 
 author_primary: Han Yin
 
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+learning_path_main_page: "yes"  # This should be surfaced when looking for related content. Only set for _index.md of learning path content.
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