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content/learning-paths/microcontrollers/yolo-on-himax/_index.md

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-title: Run Yolo computer vision model on a Himax microcontroller
+title: Run a Computer Vision Model on a Himax Microcontroller
 
 minutes_to_complete: 90
 
 who_is_this_for: This is an introduction topic for beginners on how to run a computervision application on an embedded device from Himax. This example uses an off-the-shelf Himax WiseEye2 module which is based on the Arm Cortex-M55 and Ethos-U55.
 
 learning_objectives: 
-    - Run a you-only-look-once (Yolo) model using off-the-shelf hardware based on the Arm Cortex-M55 and Ethos-U55.
+    - Run a you-only-look-once (YOLO) computer vision model using off-the-shelf hardware based on the Arm Cortex-M55 and Ethos-U55.
     - Learn how to build the Himax SDK and generate firmware image file.
     - Learn how to update firmware on edge device (Himax WiseEye2).
 

content/learning-paths/microcontrollers/yolo-on-himax/how-to-1.md

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-## Set up the development environment
+## Set up the Development Environment
 
 ### Step 1.1. Install Ubuntu
 
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-### Step 1.2. (Optional) Install Microsoft VS Code
+### Step 1.2. (Optional) Install Microsoft Visual Studio Code
 
 This is only optional. You can use any text editor you are comfortable with to view or edit code. By typing “wsl” in VS Code terminal, you can switch to Linux environment.
 

content/learning-paths/microcontrollers/yolo-on-himax/how-to-2.md

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ git clone --recursive https://github.com/HimaxWiseEyePlus/Seeed_Grove_Vision_AI_
 cd Seeed_Grove_Vision_AI_Module_V2
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-### Step 2.2. Compile the firmware
+### Step 2.2. Compile the Firmware
 
 The make build tool is used to compile the source code. This should take up around 2-3 minutes depending on the number of CPU cores available.
 
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-### Step 2.3. Generate firmware image file
+### Step 2.3. Generate a Firmware Image
 
 ```bash
 cd ../we2_image_gen_local/

content/learning-paths/microcontrollers/yolo-on-himax/how-to-3.md

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-title: Flash Firmware
+title: Flash Firmware onto the Microcontroller
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-## Flash The Firmware
+## Flash the Firmware
 
 Now that we have generated a firmware file on our local machine, we need to flash the microcontroller with this firmware. 
 

content/learning-paths/microcontrollers/yolo-on-himax/how-to-4.md

@@ -21,6 +21,6 @@ Unzip the archived file and double click `index.html`. This will open the GUI wi
 
 ### Step 4.3. Connect to the Grove Vision AI
 
-Select 'Grove Vision AI(V2)` in the top-right hand corner and press connect button. 
+Select 'Grove Vision AI(V2)' in the top-right hand corner and press connect button. 
 
 ![Himax web UI](./himax_web_ui.jpg)