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content/learning-paths/laptops-and-desktops/win_on_arm_build_onnxruntime/2-build-onnxruntime.md

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 ## Build ONNX Runtime for Windows on Arm
 Now that your environment is set up, you're ready to build the ONNX Runtime inference engine. 
 
-ONNX Runtime is an open-source inference engine for accelerating the deployment of machine learning models, particularly those in the Open Neural Network Exchange (ONNX) format. ONNX Runtime is optimized for high performance and low latency, widely used in the production deployment of AI models. 
+ONNX Runtime is an open-source engine for accelerating machine learning model inference, especially those in the Open Neural Network Exchange (ONNX) format. 
+
+ONNX Runtime is optimized for high performance and low latency, and is widely used in production deployments. 
 
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 You can learn more about ONNX Runtime by reading the [ONNX Runtime Overview](https://onnxruntime.ai/).
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 ### Clone the ONNX Runtime repository
 
-Open a developer command prompt for Visual Studio to set up the environment including path to compiler, linker, utilities and header files. 
+Open a command prompt for Visual Studio to set up the environment. This includes paths to the compiler, linker, utilities, and header files. 
 
-Create your workspace and check out the source tree:
+Then, create your workspace and clone the repository:
 
 ```bash
 cd C:\Users\%USERNAME%
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 You might be able to use a later commit. These steps have been tested with the commit `4eeefd7260b7fa42a71dd1a08b423d5e7c722050`.
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-### Build for Windows
+### Build ONNX Runtime
+
+To build the ONNX Runtime shared library, use one of the following configurations:
 
-You can build the "Release" configuration for a build optimized for performance but without debug information.
+-**Release** configuration for a build optimized for performance but without debug information:
 
 
 ```bash
 .\build.bat --config Release --build_shared_lib --parallel --compile_no_warning_as_error --skip_submodule_sync  --skip_tests
 ```
 
-
-As an alternative, you can build with "RelWithDebInfo" configuration for a release-optimized build with debug information.
+**RelWithDebInfo** configuration, which includes debug symbols for profiling or inspection:
 
 ```bash
 .\build.bat --config RelWithDebInfo  --build_shared_lib --parallel --compile_no_warning_as_error --skip_submodule_sync  --skip_tests
 ```
 
 
 ### Resulting Dynamic Link Library
-When the build is complete, the `onnxruntime.dll` dynamic linked library can be found in: 
+When the build is complete, you'll find the `onnxruntime.dll` dynamic linked library in: 
+
+* For **Release** build:
 
 ```
 dir .\build\Windows\Release\Release\onnxruntime.dll
 ```
 
-or if you build with debug information it can be found in:
+* For **RelWithDebInfo** build:
 
 ```
 dir .\build\Windows\RelWithDebInfo\RelWithDebInfo\onnxruntime.dll