terms: clarify privacy policy + ToS

Author: moehreag

privacy.html

@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ <h2 id="processed_data">Processed Data</h2>
         for purposes of diagnosing issues with the service or identifying areas
         where improvements can be made. This data may only be retained as
         anonymised statistics. Should this data be accidentally collected due to
-        a misconfiguration, it is be deleted immediately upon discovery.
+        a misconfiguration, it is to be deleted immediately upon discovery.
       </p>
       <h2>Your Rights</h2>
 
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ <h2>Changes to this Document</h2>
       will try to notify you of changes ahead of them taking effect, we
       recommend to regularly check this page to always know how we store and
       process your data since it might not be possible to notify you ahead of
-      changes since we do not store any direct contact information.
+      changes since we do not store any contact information.
     </div>
     <div class="about">
       <h5 class="warning">

tos.html

@@ -61,6 +61,12 @@ <h3 class="primer">
         and accept our privacy policy.
       </p>
 
+      <h2>Definition</h2>
+      <p>
+        The services offer features defined as individual communication (as per
+        NetzDG §1).
+      </p>
+
       <h2>Requirements</h2>
 
       <p>
@@ -83,22 +89,24 @@ <h2>Requirements</h2>
         </li>
         <li>The user must not be banned from using the services.</li>
         <li>
-          It is not allowed to use any of the provided features to circumvent
-          the law. Should we notice any illicit activity we may restrict your
-          ability to access these features.
+          The user must not use any of the provided features to circumvent the
+          law. Should we notice any illicit activity we may restrict the user's
+          ability to access the services.
         </li>
         <li>
-          You own the information you submit through the services. You must own
-          the rights to distribute any content you share.
+          The user owns the information they submit through the services. The
+          user must also own the rights to distribute any shared content.
         </li>
       </ol>
 
       <h2>Registration</h2>
 
       <p>
-        To use the services you have to create an account by logging into the
-        services with your Minecraft account. Your Minecraft account must be
-        allowed to use multiplayer features to use the services.
+        Registration is an automated process that connects your Minecraft
+        account to the data the user provides to the service. The user is
+        registered when they first connect to the service. The user's Minecraft
+        account must have multiplayer features enabled as well as be allowed to
+        use them to use the services.
       </p>
 
       <h2>Disclaimers</h2>
@@ -123,6 +131,11 @@ <h2>Disclaimers</h2>
         Services, including certain features and the support for certain devices
         and platforms, at any time.
       </p>
+      <p>
+        Should parts of this document be against current legislation in the
+        user's jurisdiction those parts become ineffective. This does not affect
+        the validity of other agreements in this document.
+      </p>
       <p>
         We may link to other services on our website or in other products.
         Despite our best efforts we may not always be able to ensure the safety
@@ -138,7 +151,7 @@ <h2>Changes to this Document</h2>
       try to notify you of changes ahead of them taking effect, we recommend to
       regularly check this page to always know how we store and process your
       data since it might not be possible to notify you ahead of changes since
-      we do not store any direct contact information.
+      we do not store any contact information.
     </div>
     <div class="about">
       <h5 class="warning">