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Author: Bhupesh-V

_posts/2025-05-10-minimalist-guide-git-clone.md

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-According to our [acceptance criteria](#acceptance-criteria), the winner is the **Bare + Treeless** approach, I ended up rolling it out on [`osscooking.com`](https://osscooking.com) as we speak, come try it out?
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-The migration was beneficial as it reduced the response time by seconds on the current deployment of osscooking.com.
+According to our [acceptance criteria](#acceptance-criteria), the winner is the **Bare + Treeless** approach, I ended up rolling it out on [`osscooking.com`](https://osscooking.com). The migration was beneficial as it reduced the repo lookup response time by seconds on the current production deployment.
 
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