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tutorials/cloud_access/cloud-access-intro.md

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ The cloud connection is handled by a separate library, usually [s3fs](https://s3
 The IRSA buckets are public and access is free.
 Credentials are not required.
 However, most tools will look for credentials by default and raise an error when none are found.
-To avoid this, users can make an "anonymous" connection, usually with a keyword argument such as `anon=True`.
+To access without credentials, users can make an anonymous connection, usually with a keyword argument such as `anon=True`.
 This notebook demonstrates with the `s3fs`, `astropy`, and `pyarrow` libraries.
 
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tutorials/parquet-catalog-demos/wise-allwise-catalog-demo.md

@@ -70,6 +70,7 @@ This AllWISE catalog is stored in an [AWS S3](https://aws.amazon.com/s3/) cloud
 To connect to an S3 bucket we just need to point the reader at S3 instead of the local filesystem.
 (Here, a "reader" is a python library that reads parquet files.)
 We'll use [pyarrow.fs.S3FileSystem](https://arrow.apache.org/docs/python/generated/pyarrow.fs.S3FileSystem.html) for this because it is recognized by every reader in examples below, and we're already using pyarrow.
+([s3fs](https://s3fs.readthedocs.io/en/latest/index.html) is another common option.)
 To access without credentials, we'll use the keyword argument `anonymous=True`.
 More information about accessing S3 buckets can be found at [](#cloud-access-intro).