Editorial updates

Author: robinharwood

docset/winserver2022-ps/storagereplica/New-SRGroup.md

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ New-SRGroup -ComputerName "SR-SRV05" -Name "ReplicationGroup01" -VolumeName "D:"
 
 This command creates a replication group for server named SR-SRV05. The command specifies the
 replicated volume and the log volume. Because this command does not specify other parameters, the
-replication group uses default values. Replication does not start until you run the
+replication group uses default values. Replication will not start until you run the
 `New-SRPartnership` cmdlet.
 
 ### Example 2: Create a replication group that uses custom properties
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ New-SRGroup @Parameters
 
 This command creates a replication group for server named SR-SRV05. The command specifies the
 replicated volume and the log volume. The command also specifies a custom log size in GB and enables
-replication traffic encryption. Replication does not start until you run `New-SRPartnership`.
+replication traffic encryption. Replication will not start until you run `New-SRPartnership`.
 
 This example uses splatting to pass parameter values from the `$Parameters` variable to the command.
 Learn more about [Splatting](/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.core/about/about_splatting).

docset/winserver2022-ps/storagereplica/New-SRPartnership.md

@@ -64,13 +64,12 @@ $Parameters = @{
 New-SRPartnership @Parameters
 ```
 
-This command creates a replication topology between servers SR-SRV05 and SR-SRV06.
-The SR-SRV05 server is the source and SR-SRV06 is the destination for the D: volume.
-The E: volume contains the logs for this partnership.
-The log has the default value of 8GB.
-The replication mode has the default value of synchronous.
-The command does not specify seeding, encryption, and consistency groups.
-Replication starts immediately.
+This command creates a replication topology between servers SR-SRV05 and SR-SRV06. The SR-SRV05
+server is the source and SR-SRV06 is the destination, with volume D: used as both the source and
+destination. The E: volume contains the logs for this partnership. The log has the default value of
+8GB. As the replication mode has not been specified, it will use the default value of synchronous.
+The command does not specify seeding, encryption, and consistency groups. Replication will start
+immediately.
 
 This example uses splatting to pass parameter values from the `$Parameters` variable to the command.
 Learn more about [Splatting](/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.core/about/about_splatting).
@@ -88,7 +87,8 @@ New-SRGroup -ComputerName "SR-SRV06" -Name "ReplicationGroup02" -VolumeName "D:"
 New-SRPartnership @Parameters" 
 ```
 
-This example creates two replication groups separately and then pairs those groups.
+This example creates two replication groups separately and then creates a partnership between those
+groups.
 
 The example uses splatting to pass parameter values from the `$Parameters` variable to the command.
 Learn more about [Splatting](/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.core/about/about_splatting).
@@ -358,9 +358,8 @@ values for this parameter are:
 
 The default value is synchronous.
 
-The default asynchronous recovery point alert time is 5 minutes.
-You can modify it by using the Set-SRPartnership cmdlet.
-The alert time has no effect on replication behavior, only on reporting.
+The default asynchronous recovery point alert time is 5 minutes. You can modify it by using the
+Set-SRPartnership cmdlet. The alert time has no effect on replication behavior, only on reporting.
 
 ```yaml
 Type: ReplicationMode

docset/winserver2022-ps/storagereplica/Set-SRGroup.md

@@ -74,8 +74,8 @@ Set-SRGroup -Name "ReplicationGroup01" -AllowVolumeResize $True
 
 This command lets you resize volumes in the replication group named ReplicationGroup01 on the local
 computer. By default, the Storage Replica driver prevents volume resizes in order to protect from
-block mismatches. To grow a volume, enable this mode on both resource groups, increase the size of
-the volume on both servers to be the same size, and then disable this mode.
+block mismatches. To grow a volume, enable the allow volume resize mode on both resource groups,
+increase the size of the volume on both servers to be the same size, then disable this mode.
 
 ## PARAMETERS
 

docset/winserver2022-ps/storagereplica/Set-SRPartnership.md

@@ -66,9 +66,9 @@ $Parameters = @{
 Set-SRPartnership @Parameters
 ```
 
-This command changes the replication direction by an administrator after a disaster has occurred
-without user confirmation. The previous source replication group named ReplicationGroup01 on
-previous source server SR-SRV05 becomes the new destination for ReplicationGroup02 on SR-SRV06.
+This example changes the replication direction without user confirmation, for example after a
+disaster recovery event has occurred. The previous source replication group named ReplicationGroup01
+on previous source server SR-SRV05 becomes the new destination for ReplicationGroup02 on SR-SRV06.
 Replication is now reversed. You must direct any applications or users attempting to read or write
 against SR-SRV05 to SR-SRV06.
 
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Set-SRPartnership @Parameters
 Get-SRPartnership | Get-SRGroup
 ```
 
-This command changes the log from its default size of 8GB to 32GB, on the partnership between
+The example changes the log from its default size of 8GB to 32GB, for the partnership between
 SR-SRV05 and SR-SRV06.
 
 This example uses splatting to pass parameter values from the `$Parameters` variable to the command.
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ $Parameters = @{
 Set-SRPartnership @Parameters
 ```
 
-This command changes the replication mode from synchronous to asynchronous. A warning is generated
-by the setting being applied to both replication groups.
+This example changes the replication mode from synchronous to asynchronous. A warning will be
+generated by the setting being applied to both replication groups.
 
 This example uses splatting to pass parameter values from the `$Parameters` variable to the command.
 Learn more about [Splatting](/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.core/about/about_splatting).
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ Set-SRPartnership @Parameters
 
 The first command changes the partnership for the servers named SR-SRV05 and SR-SRV06.The second
 command gets all replication groups for the current computer by using the Get-SRGroup cmdlet. The
-command displays all the replicas by using standard Windows PowerShell syntax.
+command displays all the replicas.
 
 This example uses splatting to pass parameter values from the `$Parameters` variable to the command.
 Learn more about [Splatting](/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.core/about/about_splatting).