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The arcade cabinet was first shown off at the 2022
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<a href="https://rochester.makerfaire.com/">Rochester Makerfaire</a>. The next exhibition of
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Devcade will be at the 2023 <a href="https://www.rit.edu/imagine/">ImagineRIT festival</a>. This cabinet is the
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first of its kind, but hopefully not the last.
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<a href="https://rochester.makerfaire.com/">Rochester Makerfaire</a>. Devcade was also
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showcased at the April 2023 <a href="https://www.rit.edu/imagine/">ImagineRIT festival</a>
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. This cabinet is the first of its kind, but hopefully not the last.
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<img style="width: 100%" src="{{ url_for('static', filename='images/cabinetirl.png') }}"></img>
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The Devcade project is led by <a href="https://noahemke.com">Noah Emke</a>,
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a third year Game Design and Deveopment major here at RIT. Noah leads a team of
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about a dozen CSH members, ranging from first years to fifth years. Many of these team
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members are making their own games for the cabinet, some are working on the backend
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API and databases, some on the onboard software, and some on the physical design of the
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cabinet itself -- there really is something for everyone on this project.
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a third year Game Design and Development major here at RIT. Noah leads a team of
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about a dozen CSH members, ranging from first years to fifth years. Many team members
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make their own games for the cabinet, while others work on the backend API and databases,
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some on the onboard software, and some on the physical design of the cabinet itself --
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there really is something for everyone on this project.
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<p></p>
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<a class="btn btn-red" href="credits">Read more</a>
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<div id="about-csh-wrapper" class="subcontent">
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<h2>What is CSH?</h2>
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Since 1976, <a href="https://csh.rit.edu">Computer Science House</a> has provided
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a living, learning environment for its members. Computer Science House is a special
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interest house at RIT with mulitple lounges, workrooms, study areas, and a datacenter, all on
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a dorm hall floor.
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Since 1976, <a href="https://csh.rit.edu">Computer Science House</a>(CSH) has provided
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a living-learning environment for its members. CSH is a Special Interest House at RIT with
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mulitple lounges, workrooms, study areas, and a datacenter, all on one dorm floor.
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Computer Science House provides its members with unique facilities, a strong social atmosphere,
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and has a strong emphasis on hands-on learning. CSH has a rich history of large-scale projects,
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including multiple internet-connected vending machine, providing a <a href="https://schedulemaker.csh.rit.edu/">schedule maker</a> to RIT students,
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and places a strong emphasis on hands-on learning. CSH has a rich history of large-scale
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projects, including multiple internet-connected vending machine, providing a
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<a href="https://schedulemaker.csh.rit.edu/">schedule maker</a> to RIT students,
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and now Devcade.
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