Yet even more edits - had to check that links work

Author: daizu27

_posts/2021-09-07-design-of-the-koji-room-koji-muro.md

@@ -121,16 +121,16 @@ The koji room's ventilation must be sufficient to remove excess heat, humidity,
 
 Let's demonstrate which of these three design criteria is our limit, using our example. 
 
-First, consider the requirements for **heat removal**. We can show that our 300kg of rice-koji at *hiki-komi* has a dry weight of 195kg, and will generate 1623W at the peak of its metabolism (see Appendix - [Step 4](step-4---determine-the-ventilation-requirements-for-heat-removal)). Our conductive heat losses were calculated to be 764W, so we know that ventilation for heat removal must equal 859W by exchanging indoor air with cold, outdoor air. This requires a ventilation rate of 41m³/h.
+First, consider the requirements for **heat removal**. We can show that our 300kg of rice-koji at *hiki-komi* has a dry weight of 195kg, and will generate 1623W at the peak of its metabolism (see Appendix - [Step 4](#step-4---determine-the-ventilation-requirements-for-heat-removal)). Our conductive heat losses were calculated to be 764W, so we know that ventilation for heat removal must equal 859W by exchanging indoor air with cold, outdoor air. This requires a ventilation rate of 41m³/h.
 
 
 ![Heat balance of the koji room with ventilation sized for heat removal](/assets/images/koji_room/02kojiroomheat.png)
 
-Next, let's consider the requirements for **moisture removal**. About 80% of the heat generated by koji is lost as water vapour, with the remaining 20% lost due to other effects. At the peak of its heat generation, we can show that the our 300kg of koji will emit 2.16kg of water per hour (see Appendix - [Step 5](step-5---determine-the-ventilation-requirements-for-moisture-removal)). By exchanging moist indoor air with dry, outdoor air, we can show that a ventilation rate of **119m³/h** is necessary to remove the moisture emitted by koji.
+Next, let's consider the requirements for **moisture removal**. About 80% of the heat generated by koji is lost as water vapour, with the remaining 20% lost due to other effects. At the peak of its heat generation, we can show that the our 300kg of koji will emit 2.16kg of water per hour (see Appendix - [Step 5](#step-5---determine-the-ventilation-requirements-for-moisture-removal)). By exchanging moist indoor air with dry, outdoor air, we can show that a ventilation rate of **119m³/h** is necessary to remove the moisture emitted by koji.
 
 ![Mass balance of the koji room with ventilation sized for moisture removal](/assets/images/koji_room/03kojiroomwater.png)
 
-Finally, let's consider the requirements for **carbon dioxide removal**. Koji has a respiratory coefficient of around 1.0 throughout its entire process, which means that the koji's peak heat generation of 1623W equates to a CO₂ generation rate of 0.3m³ CO₂/h (see Appendix - [Step 6](step-6---determine-the-ventilation-requirements-for-co-removal)) using the aerobic metabolism equation:
+Finally, let's consider the requirements for **carbon dioxide removal**. Koji has a respiratory coefficient of around 1.0 throughout its entire process, which means that the koji's peak heat generation of 1623W equates to a CO₂ generation rate of 0.3m³ CO₂/h (see Appendix - [Step 6](#step-6---determine-the-ventilation-requirements-for-co-removal)) using the aerobic metabolism equation:
 
 $$
 C_6H_{12}O_6+6O_2 \rightarrow 6CO_2 +6H_2O+2872kJ/\text{mol} \cdot \text{glucose}
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Comparing the three ventilation rates, we can see that **moisture removal**, at
 
 ### 4. Heating
 
-Knowing that our maximum ventilation rate will be **119m³/h**, let's size the heating panels of the koji-room. Our conductive heat losses are 764W, and ventilating fresh air at 119m³/h removes 2480W of heat. Our koji generates 1623W of heat at its peak, so our heater must provide at least 1621W of heat (see Appendix - [Step 7](step-7---determine-the-heating-requirements)):
+Knowing that our maximum ventilation rate will be **119m³/h**, let's size the heating panels of the koji-room. Our conductive heat losses are 764W, and ventilating fresh air at 119m³/h removes 2480W of heat. Our koji generates 1623W of heat at its peak, so our heater must provide at least 1621W of heat (see Appendix - [Step 7](#step-7---determine-the-heating-requirements)):
 
 ![Final heat balance the koji room with ventilation with ventilation sized for moisture removal](/assets/images/koji_room/05kojiroomfinal.png)