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Author: fiveop

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@@ -643,8 +643,8 @@ \subsection{Staff Acquisition/People}
 
 RSE units need to be staffed, but where do potential employees come from?
 So far, researchers accidentally find themselves in the role of an RSE because they pursued software development as part of their research.
-A more deliberate approach with specific RSE education can train people in sufficient numbers for central RSE units.
-In addition, being an RSE should be a career worth aspiring to, just as any other profession, with a long term perspective.
+A more deliberate approach with specific RSE education may be necessary to train people in sufficient numbers for central RSE units.
+Being an RSE should be a career worth aspiring to, just as any other profession, with a long term perspective.
 This is a topic covered by a separate paper \autocite{goth_foundational_competencies_2024}, but we provide a brief summary here:
 
 These RSEs will bring a diverse set of skills centred around the topics of research,