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 \label{sec:vision}
 
 In this section, we describe our vision of central RSE units at research institutions in Germany.
-Institutions is, for our purposes, a broad term including universities, other colleges, associations like Max-Planck, Helmholtz, Fraunhofer, or Leibniz, as well as other research performing organisations,
-since they show a wide variety in organisational structure as well as internal scientific diversity.
+Institutions is, for our purposes, a broad term including universities, other colleges, associations like Max-Planck, Helmholtz, Fraunhofer, or Leibniz, as well as other research performing organisations.
+They show a wide variety in organisational structure as well as internal scientific diversity.
 Thus, there can be no single optimal concept of such an RSE unit for all research institutions in Germany.
 We instead describe modular components that can be mixed and matched based on the respective local environment.