rephrase

Author: mhagdorn

paper.tex

@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ \subsubsection{Establishing the Department}
 Drawing from the concept and considering the actual initial staff situation, a first task of the centrally funded structure is to define a basic service portfolio according to the modules described in \autoref{sec:vision}.
 In addition to the already mentioned networking and teaching cf.~\autoref{sec:network} and \autoref{sec:teaching}, it seems natural to start with consultation see~\autoref{sec:consultation},
 as this allows to evaluate the potential necessities for other services such as development, infrastructure provisioning and maintenance.
-An extension of the initial service portfolio for a larger target audience requires the acquisition of further funding and installation of further positions, see below.
+An extension of the initial service portfolio for a larger target audience requires the acquisition of funding for further positions, see below.
 
 \subsubsection{Growth of the Department}