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Author: mhagdorn

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@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ \subsection{Module 5: Create a Network of Institutional Partners}%
 Thus, often a close collaboration between RSE and RDM groups helps everyone: both RSE and RDM groups by being able to offer a more comprehensive service than when working alone, as well as the researcher, who benefits from receiving this single coordinated service, instead of dealing with two independent entities.
 The question whether RSE and RDM should be located in two separate groups or should be combined in one common group is intentionally left open, as the answer depends on local, pre-existing circumstances.
 
-Some research institutions might host a dedicated \textbf{HPC group}, maybe even independent of the central IT unit.
+Some research institutions might host a dedicated \textbf{HPC group} which may or may not be part of the central IT unit.
 HPC is an RSE-related field, so HPC groups might already provide training, consulting and funding opportunities in this area.
 At the same time, HPC by nature focuses on highly efficient, many-core, if possible parallel computations.
 The challenges of an average researchers often start a long way before reaching that level, and they never might need to.