Further tighten up intro text

Author: jordanstephens

docs/intro/intro.mdx

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ import DocCardList from "@docusaurus/theme-classic/lib/theme/DocCardList";
     <img src="/img/defang-logo.svg" alt="Defang Logo" style={{width: "200px", marginBottom: "2rem"}} />
     <h1>Defang Documentation</h1>
     <p>
-        Defang is a radically simpler way for developers to develop, deploy, and debug their cloud applications. Defang enables you to easily author cloud applications in any language, build and deploy to the cloud with a single command, and iterate quickly with AI-assisted tooling.
+        Defang is a radically simpler way for developers to develop, deploy, and debug their cloud applications. Build cloud applications in any language, deploy to the cloud with a single command, and iterate quickly with AI-assisted tooling.
     </p>
     <h2>Getting Started</h2>
     <DocCardList