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doc/manual/source/release-notes-determinate/changes.md

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 * Emit warnings when using import-from-derivation by setting the `trace-import-from-derivation` option to `true` by @gustavderdrache in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#70](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/70)
 <!-- Determinate Nix version 3.6.1 -->
 
-* Fix nlohmann error in fromStructuredAttrs() by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#73](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/73)
 <!-- Determinate Nix version 3.6.2 -->
 
-* Fix trace-ifd test failure in dev shell by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#76](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/76)
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-* nix store copy-sigs: Use http-connections setting to control parallelism by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#80](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/80)
+* Faster `nix store copy-sigs` by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#80](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/80)
 
 * Document how to replicate nix-store --query --deriver with the nix cli by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#82](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/82)
 
 * Garbage collector: Keep going even when encountering an undeletable file by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#83](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/83)
 
 * nix profile: Replace ε and ∅ with descriptive English words by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#81](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/81)
 
-* Rework README by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#84](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/84)
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-* Include the source location when warning about inefficient double copies by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#79](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/79)
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 * Call out that `--keep-failed` with remote builders will keep the failed build directory on that builder by @cole-h in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#85](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/85)

doc/manual/source/release-notes-determinate/rl-3.6.2.md

@@ -3,12 +3,11 @@
 * Based on [upstream Nix 2.29.0](../release-notes/rl-2.29.md).
 
 ## What's Changed
-* Fix trace-ifd test failure in dev shell by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#76](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/76)
-* nix store copy-sigs: Use http-connections setting to control parallelism by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#80](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/80)
+* Dramatically improve the performance of nix store copy-sigs: Use http-connections setting to control parallelism by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#80](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/80)
 * Document how to replicate nix-store --query --deriver with the nix cli by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#82](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/82)
-* Garbage collector: Keep going even when encountering an undeletable file by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#83](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/83)
+* The garbage collector no longer gives up if it encounters an undeletable file, by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#83](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/83)
 * nix profile: Replace ε and ∅ with descriptive English words by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#81](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/81)
-* Rework README by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#84](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/84)
+* Rework README to clarify that this distribution is our distribution, by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#84](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/84)
 * Include the source location when warning about inefficient double copies by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#79](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/79)
 * Call out that `--keep-failed` with remote builders will keep the failed build directory on that builder by @cole-h in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#85](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/85)