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isc25/EESSI/handson.tex

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-A significant portion of the tutorial time is used for guided examples and hands-on,
-as they are fundamental to exposing the benefits of EESSI.
-This highlights the practical nature of the tutorial.
+A significant portion of the tutorial is used for guided examples and hands-on,
+which are fundamental to exposing the benefits of EESSI and highlight the practical nature of the tutorial.
 Before each example session the theoretical concepts are explained through a consistent set of presentation materials.
 The guided examples will be carried out in a pre-configured environment on virtual machines in the Cloud that can be
 accessed by the
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 advanced features, and how to contribute to EESSI.
 % Each example builds on the previous one and hence also showcases a typical workflow.
 The guided examples will happen mostly in the proximity of a coffee break allowing the attendees to continue
-a bit during the coffee break should they want to and ensuring the maximum benefit from the tutorial.
+during the coffee break should they want to and ensuring the maximum benefit from the tutorial.
 
 The tutorial is based on previous online tutorials from December 2023
 \href{https://raw.githubusercontent.com/eessi/docs/main/talks/20231205-Introduction-to-EESSI-CASTIEL2/20231205-Introduction-to-EESSI-CASTIEL2.pdf}{"An introduction to EESSI"} ($\sim60$ live attendees, see \href{https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAYI9oKFLxA}{YouTube for recording}) and
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 A tutorial website will be created and referring to the EESSI documentation on
 \href{https://www.eessi.io/docs}{https://www.eessi.io/docs} (similar to \href{https://tutorial.easybuild.io/}{https://tutorial.easybuild.io/}).
 
-It should be noted that even though this tutorial has never been presented at ISC, all the authors have extensive
-experience in other tutorials and workshops, both inside and outside the ISC and SC conference series. Additionally,
-they engaged in other collaborative efforts within the EESSI and EasyBuild community. Providing coherent and streamlined
+It should be noted that though this tutorial has never been presented at ISC, all the authors have extensive
+experience in other tutorials and workshops, both inside and outside the ISC conference series.
+They are also engaged in other collaborative training efforts within the EESSI and EasyBuild community. Providing coherent and streamlined
 tutorial is well within the authors' experience.
 
 % This tutorial was presented in the half-day format at ISC'22