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Author: Manushi Majumdar

guide/13-managing-arcgis-applications/hub-premium-guide.ipynb

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     "# Introduction to ArcGIS Hub - Premium features\n",
     "\n",
-    "ArcGIS Hub Premium enables organizations, like local non-profits, governments, or schools, that want to share a project or an update with their community to start an initiative or to create a site and to organize content and teams to share web maps, apps, datasets, and more with the public. Hub Premium also supports creating and sharing events related to your initiative using hub's built-in events management system. Click [here](https://www.esri.com/en-us/arcgis/products/arcgis-hub/resources) to learn more about ArcGIS Hub.\n",
+    "ArcGIS Hub Premium enables organizations, like local non-profits, governments, or schools, to share a project or update with their community by starting an initiative or creating a site and organizing content and teams to share web maps, apps, datasets, and more with the public. Hub Premium also supports creating and sharing events related to your initiative using hub's built-in events management system. Click [here](https://www.esri.com/en-us/arcgis/products/arcgis-hub/resources) to learn more about ArcGIS Hub.\n",
     "\n",
     "In this notebook, we will explore the Hub Premium capabilities of __Initiatives__ and __Events__."
    ]
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
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    "source": [
-    "We will now sign into a particular organization with Hub Premium enabled for the purpose of demonstrating these workflows. \n",
+    "First, we will sign in to an organization with Hub Premium enabled to demonstrate these workflows. \n",
     "\n",
     "Note: In order to replicate these workflows for yourself, you may have to verify the features available to you, per your ArcGIS Hub licensing. \n",
     "\n",
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    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "We will now connect to the Hub associated with this Web GIS."
+    "Next, we will connect to the Hub associated with this Web GIS."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -77,9 +77,9 @@
    "source": [
     "### Adding new Initiatives\n",
     "\n",
-    "An Initiative supports policy- or activity-oriented goals through workflows, tools and team collaboration. Initiatives manage the team, events, content, and experiences around a shared goal.\n",
+    "An Initiative supports policy or activity oriented goals through workflows, tools and team collaboration. Initiatives manage the team, events, content, and experiences involved in achieving a shared goal.\n",
     "\n",
-    "You can add a new initiative as follows:"
+    "You can add a new initiative with the following commands:"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -345,15 +345,15 @@
    "source": [
     "### Searching for Events\n",
     "\n",
-    "ArcGIS Hub supports engagement through in-person and virtual events. Events are meetings for people to support an Initiative. Events are scheduled by an organizer and have many attendees. An Event has a Group so that they can include content for preparation as well as gather and archive content during the event for later retrieval or analysis."
+    "ArcGIS Hub supports engagement through in-person and virtual events. Events are meetings for people to support an Initiative and are scheduled by an organizer and have many attendees. An Event will have an associated Group that will allow you to include content for preparation as well as gather and archive content during the event for later retrieval or analysis."
    ]
   },
   {
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    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "Note: The pattern to add, search, get, update, delete Events is identical to that of Initiatives."
+    "Note: The pattern to add, search, get, update and delete Events is identical to that of Initiatives."
    ]
   },
   {