Fix grammar and readability in Beginners' Day page.

Author: t-redactyl

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 On Saturday 19th July, we'll be hosting a day to help introduce people to Python and its applications which will feature three tracks running in parallel. The events are designed to welcome newcomers to the Python ecosystem, including a series of talks and panels by junior developers and two workshops designed to introduce complete beginners to web development and data science.
 
-EuroPython Beginners' Day is open to everyone, from high school students or a late career changers. Entry is free for EuroPython ticket holders, and €5 otherwise. Tickets for the Beginners' Day can be purchased here.
+EuroPython Beginners' Day is open to everyone, from high school students or late career changers. Entry is free for EuroPython ticket holders, and €5 otherwise. Tickets for the Beginners' Day can be purchased here.
 
 Please sign up for the Beginners' Day and the specific track you're interested in using [this form](https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSddM9RqRYc9jglmF-6vORbnFQ-_ymONU2cugUgB9poqqzLp5w/viewform?usp=dialog). The number of places available for each track is as follows:
 * **Beginners' Day panels and workshops**: X places
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 ### Humble Data
 
-Humble Data is an inclusive, beginner-friendly workshop that introduces participants to data science using Python. It is aimed at people from underrepresented groups in tech, but is open to everyone. Throughout this interactive session, you'll learn essential Python programming concepts while exploring real-world datasets, creating visualizations, and discovering patterns through analysis. Experienced mentors will guide you through each step, from setting up your environment to implementing data analysis techniques. The workshop emphasizes a hands-on approach where you'll actively work with tools like Jupyter notebooks, pandas, and matplotlib in a supportive, collaborative atmosphere.
+Humble Data is an inclusive, beginner-friendly workshop that introduces participants to data science using Python. It is aimed at people from underrepresented groups in tech but is open to everyone. Throughout this interactive session, you'll learn essential Python programming concepts while exploring real-world datasets, creating visualizations, and discovering patterns through analysis. Experienced mentors will guide you through each step, from setting up your environment to implementing data analysis techniques. The workshop emphasizes a hands-on approach where you'll actively work with tools like Jupyter notebooks, pandas, and matplotlib in a supportive, collaborative atmosphere.
 
 No prior programming or data science experience is necessary: just bring your laptop and curiosity, and you'll leave with practical skills to begin your data science journey.