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@@ -2,42 +2,36 @@
 title: Community Organisers Activities
 url: /community-activities
 subtitle:
-  Booths, Open spaces, and more activities for organisers
+  Booths, open spaces, and more activities for organisers
 ---
 
 # Community Organisers Activities
 
-The Python community is an essential part of the language, and for many people
-the reason for sticking around and keep meetups, conferences, forums, and many
-more things running, in order to help others.
+The Python community is an essential part of the language, and for many people, it's
+the reason they stick around and keep meetups, conferences, forums, and so much more running to help others.
 
-This year at EuroPython, we have a few activities focused on some of the
-communities around Europe and world, but also initiatives around Python.
+This year at EuroPython, we have several activities focused on communities across Europe and around the world, as well as initiatives centered around Python itself. 
 
 
 ## Community Organisers Open Space
 
-Communication is the key to avoid repetition and failing on the same mistakes.
-Let's be together and share the experience of our communities and our personal
-challenges and wins so more communities can improve.
+Communication is key to avoiding repetition and learning from past mistakes.
+Let's come together and share the experiences of our communities, as well as and our personal
+challenges and successes, so that more communities can grow and improve.
 
-This year, we are saving a two-hour slot in the Open Spaces for all the community
-and conference organisers that want to share their experiences, and more
-importantly, to see how the EuroPython Society can help you to achieve your
-goals and solve your current issues.
+This year, we are dedicating a two-hour slot in the Open Spaces to all community organisers who want to share their experiences. More
+importantly, it's a chance to explore how the EuroPython Society can support you in achieving your
+goals and addressing your current challenges.
 
 * Room: TBD
 * Time: TBD
 
 ## Community Organisers Lunch
 
-Do you know all the organisers from other European communities and conferences?
-If not, you have a good opportunity to meet more people, that like you, are
-doing their best for keep more Python events and communities running,
-so more people have the chance of learning and improving at Python!
+Do you know all the organizers from other European Python communities and conferences?
+If not, this is a great opportunity to meet more people who, just like you, are doing their best to keep Python events and communities alive—so that more people have the chance to learn, connect, and grow with Python!
 
-We will be meeting at TBD during TBD for a special lunch, where you will be
-able to relax and get to know more people with the same passion as yours.
+We'll be meeting on Friday, July 18, at 12:55 in the Zoom room on the first floor near the registration area for a special lunch—an opportunity to connect with others who share your passion.
 
 ## Community Booths
 
@@ -51,4 +45,4 @@ Community Booth lineup!
 
 ## PyLadies Open Space & Lunch
 
-Check [the PyLadies activities page](/pyladies) for more information.
+Check out [the PyLadies activities page](/pyladies) for more information.