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Co-authored-by: Eduardo Rodrigues <[email protected]>

Author: graeme-a-stewart

organization/_posts/2025/2025-02-11-steering.md

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ On the issue of HSF funding, the AG were not optimistic about the HSF receiving
     - This is (Paul says) quite a lightweight process
     - CAGI offers help, there are some instructions [online](https://www.cagi.ch/en/practical-infos/creating-an-association/)
     - and the Swiss SME page [here](https://www.kmu.admin.ch/kmu/en/home/concrete-know-how/setting-up-sme/starting-business/choosing-legal-structure/associations.html) provides a brief overview
-    - TLDR is there must be an annual general assembly, association statutes (templates available at the above sites) and a minimum of two people to constitute the association board. An annual account summary needs to be submitted after presentation at the general assembly
+    - TLDR there must be an annual general assembly, association statutes (templates available at the above sites) and a minimum of two people to constitute the association board. An annual account summary needs to be submitted after presentation at the general assembly
 
 An alternative is to get more official recognition for the HSF: this could unlock more significant in-kind contributions.
 
@@ -114,17 +114,17 @@ Few people have filled in requests to change roles.
 
 ## SG Chair Role
 
-Graeme will need to step down as SG Chair when at the end of June (after 1 year mandate). Vital for the HSF that this continues.
+Graeme will need to step down as SG Chair at the end of June (after 1 year mandate). Vital for the HSF that this role continues.
 
-Time for one person to do this role is estimated as minimum 20%, with peaks or 30-40% (e.g., in January with the convener renewal and AG meeting it has been more).
+Time for one person to do this role is estimated as minimum 20%, with peaks at 30-40% (e.g., in January with the convener renewal and AG meeting it has been more).
 
 Can this continue incarnated in a single person? Or will it require a couple of co-chairs?
 
 Any ideas on other ways to support this position? CERN project associateship might fly if the experiments supported it?
 
 ## European Strategy Update 2025
 
-[Public draft](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dTUBTlerXHjrKO37hAuK1MednfukOxvkCSnq0HrnPOM/edit?usp=sharing) released last week. Nothing *too* controversial... Did an editing/resolving pass yesterday and bumped some items back to the AA editors. Hope to conclude on this stage by 18 February.
+[Public draft](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dTUBTlerXHjrKO37hAuK1MednfukOxvkCSnq0HrnPOM/edit?usp=sharing) released last week. Nothing *too* controversial... We did an editing/resolving pass yesterday and bumped some items back to the AA editors. Hope to conclude on this stage by 18 February.
 
 We did give a heads-up to the experiments about endorsement - it's good idea to follow up on that rather soon.