Review updates

Author: graeme-a-stewart

organization/_posts/2025/2025-02-11-steering.md

@@ -114,17 +114,17 @@ Few people have filled in requests to change roles.
 
 ## SG Chair Role
 
-Graeme will need to step down as SG Chair when at the end of June (after 1 year mandate). Vital for the HSF that this continues.
+Graeme will need to step down as SG Chair at the end of June (after 1 year mandate). Vital for the HSF that this continues.
 
-Time for one person to do this role is estimated as minimum 20%, with peaks or 30-40% (e.g., in January with the convener renewal and AG meeting it has been more).
+Time for one person to do this role is estimated as minimum 20%, with peaks of 30-40% (e.g., in January with the convener renewal and AG meeting it has been more).
 
 Can this continue incarnated in a single person? Or will it require a couple of co-chairs?
 
 Any ideas on other ways to support this position? CERN project associateship might fly if the experiments supported it?
 
 ## European Strategy Update 2025
 
-[Public draft](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dTUBTlerXHjrKO37hAuK1MednfukOxvkCSnq0HrnPOM/edit?usp=sharing) released last week. Nothing *too* controversial... Did an editing/resolving pass yesterday and bumped some items back to the AA editors. Hope to conclude on this stage by 18 February.
+[Public draft](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dTUBTlerXHjrKO37hAuK1MednfukOxvkCSnq0HrnPOM/edit?usp=sharing) released last week. Nothing *too* controversial... We did an editing/resolving pass yesterday and bumped some items back to the AA editors. Hope to conclude on this stage by 18 February.
 
 We did give a heads-up to the experiments about endorsement - it's good idea to follow up on that rather soon.
 
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ Details on the [workshop Indico page](https://indico.cern.ch/e/wlcg-hsf-2025).
 
 ## Seminar Series and C&AF
 
-We have agreed to merge the *organisation* of the HSF Seminars and the CAF, but to keep their separate identities for now. The Indico category is now...
+We have agreed to merge the *organisation* of the HSF Seminars and the CAF, but to keep their separate identities for now. A new Indico category needs to be finalised.
 
 Organisers from the HSF: Stefan, Claire, Nicole, Michel