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 import Link from '@docusaurus/Link';
 
-If you're a publisher and are concerned about keeping your first-party data (emails or telephone numbers) within your corporate network, you might choose to deploy a <Link href="../ref-info/glossary-uid#gl-private-operator">Private Operator</Link>. In this scenario, you choose to host a private instance exclusively for your own use.
+If you're a publisher and want to keep your first-party data within your corporate network, you might choose to deploy a <Link href="../ref-info/glossary-uid#gl-private-operator">Private Operator</Link>. In this scenario, you choose to host a private instance exclusively for your own use.
 
 For additional information, review these resources: