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doc/release-notes/10680-Bagit-Change.md

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 ### Archival Bag Configuration Change
 
-Archival Bags now exclusively use the JVM option `dataverse.bagit.sourceorg.name` in generating the bag.info file's "Internal-Sender-Identifier" rather than pulling the value from a deprecated `bagit.SourceOrganization` entry in Bundle.properties (appending " Catalog" in both cases). Sites using archival bags would not see a change if these settings were already using the same value. See #10680 and #11416.
+Archival Bags now use the JVM option `dataverse.bagit.sourceorg.name` in generating the bag-info.txt file's "Internal-Sender-Identifier" (in addition to its use for "Source-Organization") rather than pulling the value from a deprecated `bagit.SourceOrganization` entry in Bundle.properties ("Internal-Sender-Identifier" is generated by appending " Catalog" in both cases). Sites using archival bags would not see a change if these settings were already using the same value. See #10680 and #11416.
 
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