Update 30-day-warranty problem statement

Updated problem statement.  Attempting to achieve greater clarity via:

* Shorter, focused sentences.
* Active voice.

Author: rrrutledge

30-day-warranty.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Teams depends on another team accepting their contributions so that a component
 
 # Problem
 
-A team developing a component which is used throughout an organization resists accepting or rejecting contributions (feature requests) and as a result blocks progress or is disrupted by frequent escalations.
+A team develops a component which is used throughout an organization.  This team resists accepting or outright rejects contributions (feature requests).  This behavior blocks progress and leads to frequent disruption from escalations.
 
 # Forces