Fix poor formulation pointed out in #29359

Author: Keno

doc/src/manual/conversion-and-promotion.md

@@ -93,8 +93,8 @@ ERROR: MethodError: Cannot `convert` an object of type String to an object of ty
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 Some languages consider parsing strings as numbers or formatting numbers as strings to be conversions
-(many dynamic languages will even perform conversion for you automatically), however Julia does
-not: even though some strings can be parsed as numbers, most strings are not valid representations
+(many dynamic languages will even perform conversion for you automatically). This is not the case in Julia.
+Even though some strings can be parsed as numbers, most strings are not valid representations
 of numbers, and only a very limited subset of them are. Therefore in Julia the dedicated [`parse`](@ref)
 function must be used to perform this operation, making it more explicit.