Login module - Suggestions of a translator at Transifex

[rich20]

We have this source text on transifex for our Login module:

Select the page the user will be redirected to after successfully ending their current session by logging out. Select from all the pages listed in the dropdown menu. If no selection is made, the Front Page will be loaded by default.

Now I saw randomly these suggestions for these phrases on Transifex.

"Select from all the pages listed in the dropdown menu."
In no case the user can select from "a subset" of the pages listed, therefore the word "all" should be removed.
"Select from the pages listed in the dropdown menu." sounds better.

"after successfully ending their current session by logging out" should be replaced with a simpler "after logging out".
The logout action is indeed a "successfully ending of the current session" by definition.

Is it so more correct? If yes, it should be changed.

Select the page the user will be redirected to after logging out. Select from the pages listed in the dropdown menu. If no selection is made, the Front Page will be loaded by default.