fix(network): doc review (scaleway#3828)

RoRoJ · Laure-di · commit 4866c816489c · 2025-02-27T11:14:29.000+01:00
* fix(vpc): started review

* fix(docs): review
diff --git a/network/public-gateways/how-to/move-to-routed-ip.mdx b/network/public-gateways/how-to/move-to-routed-ip.mdx
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 ---
 meta:
   title: How to move your Public Gateway to a routed IP
-  description: This page explains how to move your Public Gateway from a legacy NAT IP addressing solution, to a routed IP solution, compatible with Scaleway's IP mobility project and features.
+  description: Find out how to move your Public Gateway from a legacy NAT IP addressing solution, to a routed IP solution, compatible with Scaleway's IP mobility project and features.
 content:
   h1: How to move your Public Gateway to a routed IP
-  paragraph: This page explains how to move your Public Gateway from a legacy NAT IP addressing solution, to a routed IP solution, compatible with Scaleway's IP mobility project and features.
+  paragraph: Find out how to move your Public Gateway from a legacy NAT IP addressing solution, to a routed IP solution, compatible with Scaleway's IP mobility project and features.
 tags: public-gateway public gateway nat-ip routed-ip ip-mobility
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-04-03
+  validation: 2024-10-07
   posted: 2024-04-03
 categories:
   - network
diff --git a/network/vpc/how-to/assets/scaleway-create-a-pn.webp b/network/vpc/how-to/assets/scaleway-create-a-pn.webp
diff --git a/network/vpc/how-to/assets/scaleway-create-pn.webp b/network/vpc/how-to/assets/scaleway-create-pn.webp
diff --git a/network/vpc/how-to/attach-resources-to-pn.mdx b/network/vpc/how-to/attach-resources-to-pn.mdx
@@ -41,14 +41,10 @@ The following resource types can be attached to a Private Network:
 
 1. Click **VPC** in the **Network** section of the side menu. Your VPC [dashboard](https://console.scaleway.com/vpc/vpc) displays:
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-default-vpc.webp" alt="" />
-
 2. Click the VPC containing the Private Network to which you want to attach a resource.
 
     A list of Private Networks in this VPC displays:
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pns.webp" alt="" />
-
 3. Click the Private Network to which you want to attach a resource.
 
     The Private Network's dashboard displays.
diff --git a/network/vpc/how-to/create-private-network.mdx b/network/vpc/how-to/create-private-network.mdx
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 ---
 meta:
   title: How to create a Private Network
-  description: This page explains how to create a Private Network in a Scaleway VPC
+  description: Find out how to create a Private Network in a Scaleway VPC, and start building optimized, secure cloud infrastructures away from the public internet
 content:
   h1: How to create a Private Network
-  paragraph: This page explains how to create a Private Network in a Scaleway VPC
+  paragraph: Find out how to create a Private Network in a Scaleway VPC, and start building optimized, secure cloud infrastructures away from the public internet
 tags: regional-private-network private-network vpc virtual-private-cloud region
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-04-02
+  validation: 2024-10-07
   posted: 2023-03-21
 categories:
   - network
@@ -30,19 +30,15 @@ While DHCP is built into all new Private Networks, it may not be automatically a
 
 1. Click **VPC** in the **Network** section of the side menu. The list of your VPCs displays:
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-default-vpc.webp" alt="" />
-
     Each Private Network must be created within a VPC. A default VPC is created for you in each Scaleway region.
 
 2. Click the VPC you wish to create your Private Network in.
 
     If you already have existing Private Networks in this VPC, a list of these displays. Otherwise, you see a welcome screen.
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pn-welcome.webp" alt="" />
-
 3. Click **+ Create Private Network**. The creation screen displays.
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-create-pn.webp" alt=""/>
+    <Lightbox src="scaleway-create-a-pn.webp" alt="A screen of the Scaleway console, showing the steps to create a Private Network: Enter a name, check the region, enter tags and (optionally) expand the Advanced Settings section"/>
 
 4. Enter a **name** for the network, or leave the randomly generated name in place. Optionally, you can also add **tags** to help organize your Private Networks. Each tag should be separated by a space.
 
@@ -70,19 +66,19 @@ The IPv4 CIDR block is defined at the time of creating the Private Network. You
 
 Automatically generating a CIDR block is the default (and recommended) setting when creating a Private Network. Simply follow the steps [above](#how-to-create-a-private-network) to create a Private Network, leave **Advanced Settings** at default values, and a `/22` CIDR block will be automatically generated for the Private Network.
 
-This block is guaranteed to be unique within the VPC, and will not overlap with any of your other Private Networks. It gives 1024 private IPv4 addresses, of which 1022 are available to be allocated to resources attached to the Private Network.
+This block is guaranteed to be unique within the VPC, and will not overlap with any of your other Private Networks. It gives 1024 private IPv4 addresses, of which 1022 are available to be allocated to resources attached to the Private Network. The first two and last two addresses in the block are not available.
 
 #### Defining a custom CIDR block
 
 If you prefer, you can define your own custom IPv4 CIDR block when creating your Private Network. This is only recommended for advanced users.
 
 1. Follow the steps [above](#how-to-create-a-private-network) to create a Private Network, and at step 5, click **Advanced Settings**.
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pn-advanced-settings.webp" alt="" />
+    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pn-advanced-settings.webp" alt="The Advanced Settings section of the Create a Private Network screen in the Scaleway console. It shows the options to automatically generate a CIDR block for the subnet, or define your own." />
 
 2. Click **Define custom**. The following screen displays:
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pn-define-custom.webp" alt="" />
+    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pn-define-custom.webp" alt="The Advanced Settings section of the Create a Private Network screen in the Scaleway console. The user is prompted to enter a prefix and a network size." />
 
 3. Enter a network **prefix**. This should typically be in the following ranges normally used for private networks:
     - `192.168.0.0` - `192.168.255.255`
diff --git a/network/vpc/how-to/delete-private-network.mdx b/network/vpc/how-to/delete-private-network.mdx
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ content:
   paragraph: This page explains how to delete a Private Network
 tags: regional-private-network private-network vpc virtual-private-cloud delete destroy
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-04-02
+  validation: 2024-10-04
   posted: 2023-03-21
 categories:
   - network
@@ -26,13 +26,9 @@ categories:
 
     Each Private Network exists within a VPC.
 
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-default-vpc.webp" alt="" />
-
 2. Click the VPC containing the Private Network you want to delete.
 
-    A list of your Private Networks in this VPC displays:
-
-    <Lightbox src="scaleway-pns.webp" alt="" />
+    A list of your Private Networks in this VPC displays.
 
 3. Click the <Icon name="more" /> icon next to the Private Network you want to delete, then click **Delete** on the pop-up menu.
 
diff --git a/network/vpc/troubleshooting/vpc-limitations.mdx b/network/vpc/troubleshooting/vpc-limitations.mdx
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ content:
   paragraph: This page sets out some known limitations of Scaleway's VPC
 tags: vpc regional-private-networks
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-04-02
+  validation: 2024-10-14
   posted: 2023-03-22
 categories:
   - network
