address PR review comments

Author: namiroues

pages/events.md

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-MDAnalysis hosts and participates in various **community-driven events, user group meetings (UGMs), and workshops** to foster collaboration, learning, and to contribute to the MDAnalysis ecosystem.
+MDAnalysis hosts and participates in various **community-driven events, user group meetings (UGMs), and workshops** to foster collaboration and learning.
 
-This page provides information on **upcoming and past events**, including **UGMs, technical workshops, and training sessions**. Whether you're a developer, researcher, or new to the field, these events provide opportunities to **engage, learn, and contribute**.
+This page provides information on **upcoming and past events**, including **UGMs, workshops and talks**. Whether you're a developer, researcher, or new to the field, these events provide opportunities to engage with and contribute to the MDAnalysis ecosystem.
 
 For mentoring programs and outreach opportunities, please visit the [Contribute]({{ site.baseurl }}/pages/contribute/) page.
 
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 ## User Group Meetings (UGMs)
 
-UGMs are community-driven meetings where developers and users present new features, share use cases, and discuss improvements.
+UGMs are meetings where users meet developers, share best practices, present new features, and discuss improvements.
 
 ### Past UGMs
 - [UGM 2024][]
 - [UGM 2023][]
 
 ## Workshops & Training
 
-MDAnalysis organizes workshops and training sessions to help users and developers improve their skills in molecular dynamics analysis.
+MDAnalysis organizes workshops and training sessions designed for both beginner and intermediate users to help them improve their skills in molecular dynamics analysis.
 
-Recordings of many past workshops are available on our [YouTube channel][].
+<!-- TODO: Add a link to workshop materials when available -->
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+Recordings of past workshops are available on our [YouTube channel][].
 
 ### Past Workshops
 - [Online Workshop - Introduction to MDAnalysis and Molecular Nodes 2024][]