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Author: v-phoebh

support/azure/azure-kubernetes/extensions/istio-add-on-general-troubleshooting.md

@@ -241,9 +241,9 @@ If your application pod starts before the Envoy sidecar starts, the application
 
 If your cluster uses an HTTP proxy for outbound internet access, you'll have to configure a Service Entry. For more information, see [HTTP proxy support in Azure Kubernetes Service](/azure/aks/http-proxy#istio-add-on-http-proxy-for-external-services).
 
-### Step 6: Enable Envoy Access Logging
+### Step 6: Enable Envoy access logging
 
-Enabling Envoy [access logging](https://istio.io/latest/docs/tasks/observability/logs/access-log/) helps identity and pinpoint issues in the gateways and sidecar proxies. For more details about logging and telemetry collection for the Istio add-on, see the documentations on [mesh configuration](/azure/aks/istio-meshconfig), [Telemetry API](/azure/aks/istio-telemetry), and [Istio metrics collection](/azure/aks/istio-metrics-managed-prometheus).
+Enabling Envoy [access logging](https://istio.io/latest/docs/tasks/observability/logs/access-log/) helps identify and pinpoint issues in the gateways and sidecar proxies. For more information about logging and telemetry collection for the Istio add-on, see the documentation on [mesh configuration](/azure/aks/istio-meshconfig), [Telemetry API](/azure/aks/istio-telemetry), and [Istio metrics collection](/azure/aks/istio-metrics-managed-prometheus).
 
 ## Error messages
 

support/azure/azure-kubernetes/extensions/istio-add-on-ingress-gateway.md

@@ -96,10 +96,10 @@ After you create the `SecretProviderClass` resource, to ensure secrets sync from
 
 ### Step 6: Customize ingress gateway service settings
 
-The add-on also supports [customizing the Kubernetes service for the Istio ingress gateway](/azure/aks/istio-deploy-ingress#ingress-gateway-service-customizations) for certain annotations and the `.spec.externalTrafficPolicy` setting. In certain cases, changing the `.spec.externalTrafficPolicy` to `Local` can assist with troubleshooting connectivity and networking issues, as it preserves the client source IP for the incoming request at the ingress gateway.
+The add-on also supports [customizing the Kubernetes service for the Istio ingress gateway](/azure/aks/istio-deploy-ingress#ingress-gateway-service-customizations) for certain annotations and the `.spec.externalTrafficPolicy` setting. In certain cases, changing `.spec.externalTrafficPolicy` to `Local` can assist with troubleshooting connectivity and networking issues, as it preserves the client source IP for the incoming request at the ingress gateway.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Changing the `.spec.externalTrafficPolicy` to `Local` might cause imbalanced traffic spreading. Before applying this change, we recommend reading the Kubernetes document about [Preserving the client source IP](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/access-application-cluster/create-external-load-balancer/#preserving-the-client-source-ip) to understand the tradeoffs between the different `externalTrafficPolicy` settings.
+> Changing `.spec.externalTrafficPolicy` to `Local` might cause imbalanced traffic spreading. Before applying this change, we recommend reading the Kubernetes document about [Preserving the client source IP](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/access-application-cluster/create-external-load-balancer/#preserving-the-client-source-ip) to understand the tradeoffs between the different `externalTrafficPolicy` settings.
 
 ## References