Acrolinx fixes & TOC update

Author: v-tappelgate

support/windows-server/toc.yml

@@ -2816,6 +2816,8 @@ items:
     items:
     - name: Can't add a second Fibre Channel adapter
       href: ./virtualization/cannot-add-second-fibre-channel-adapter-hyperv.md
+    - name: "Can't connect to Hyper-V shared storage on Windows Server 2016"
+      href: ./virtualization/cant-connect-to-hyper-v-shared-storage-on-windows-server-2016.md
     - name: Error message after you put the page file on another drive other than the drive C
       href: ./virtualization/error-message-page-file-another-drive-guest-operating-system.md
     - name: FCoE IO failures on Hyper-V guests

support/windows-server/virtualization/cant-connect-to-hyper-v-shared-storage-on-windows-server-2016.md

@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ Such connection issues are most likely related to one or more of the following c
 > - You have Administrator-level permissions for the Windows Server 2016 computer.
 > - The Hyper-V role is correctly configured on the computer.
 > - The computer meets all relevant hardware and software requirements for shared storage. For more information, see [Windows Server storage architectures with Hyper-V](/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/storage-architecture).
-> - You are familiar with how to configure Hyper-V and shared storage environments.
+> - You're familiar with how to configure Hyper-V and shared storage environments.
 
 To resolve the connection issue, follow these steps:
 
 1. Check your shared storage configuration. Make sure that the shared storage is correctly configured and accessible within your Windows Server 2016 environment.
 1. In Hyper-V, check storage path settings.
-1. Check the network interfaces and switches between the computer and the shared storage devices. Make sure that they are correctly configured.
+1. Check the network interfaces and switches between the computer and the shared storage devices. Make sure that they're correctly configured.
 1. Make sure that the computer successfully connects to the shared storage devices.
 1. In Hyper-V Manager, check the configuration of the VMs. Verify that the VMs correctly map to the shared storage.
 1. Make sure that the shared storage is online, and that the computer can access it.
@@ -56,4 +56,4 @@ If the issue persists, collect the following information and then contact Micros
 
 - Notes that describe any adjustments that you made to the configuration and any observed changes in behavior.
 - Any events from the Event Log that might relate to the issue.
-- Results of any additional diagnostic tests that you have run on the system/
+- Results of any other diagnostic tests that you used on the system.