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Author: v-phoebh

support/azure/virtual-machines/linux/serial-console-linux.md

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ By default, all subscriptions have serial console access enabled. You can disabl
 ### Use Serial Console with custom boot diagnostics storage account firewall enabled
 
 > [!CAUTION]
-> There is a known issue where Azure Serial Console might fail to connect when a custom boot diagnostics storage account has firewall restrictions. This issue occurs because Azure Serial Console runs in Microsoft's internal tenant, and firewall rules on the customer-managed storage account might block its access, even with correct permissions.
+> There's a known issue where Azure Serial Console might fail to connect when a custom boot diagnostics storage account has firewall restrictions. This issue occurs because Azure Serial Console runs in Microsoft's internal tenant, and firewall rules on the customer-managed storage account might block its access, even with correct permissions.
 > To avoid connectivity issues, [switch to managed boot diagnostics](../windows/boot-diagnostics.md#enable-boot-diagnostics-on-existing-virtual-machine) (recommended) or remove the firewall on the custom boot diagnostics storage account.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]

support/azure/virtual-machines/windows/serial-console-errors.md

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Error                             |   Mitigation
 "Azure Serial Console requires boot diagnostics to be enabled. Click here to configure boot diagnostics for your virtual machine." | Ensure that the virtual machine (VM) or virtual machine scale set has [boot diagnostics](boot-diagnostics.md) enabled. When using serial console on a virtual machine scale set instance, ensure that your instance has the latest model.
 "Azure Serial Console requires a virtual machine to be running. Use the Start button to start your virtual machine."  | The VM or virtual machine scale set instance must be in a started state to access the serial console (your VM must not be stopped or deallocated). Ensure your VM or virtual machine scale set instance is running and try again.
 "Azure Serial Console is not enabled for this subscription, contact your subscription administrator to enable." | The Azure Serial Console can be disabled at a subscription level. If you're a subscription administrator, you may [enable and disable the Azure Serial Console](./serial-console-enable-disable.md). If you aren't a subscription administrator, you should reach out to your subscription administrator for next steps.
-A "Forbidden" response was encountered when accessing this VM's boot diagnostic storage account. | There is a known issue where Azure Serial Console might fail to connect when a custom boot diagnostics storage account has firewall restrictions. This issue occurs because Azure Serial Console runs in Microsoft's internal tenant, and firewall rules on the customer-managed storage account might block its access, even with correct permissions. To avoid connectivity issues, [switch to managed boot diagnostics](boot-diagnostics.md#enable-boot-diagnostics-on-existing-virtual-machine) (recommended) or remove the firewall on the custom boot diagnostics storage account.
+A "Forbidden" response was encountered when accessing this VM's boot diagnostic storage account. | There's a known issue where Azure Serial Console might fail to connect when a custom boot diagnostics storage account has firewall restrictions. This issue occurs because Azure Serial Console runs in Microsoft's internal tenant, and firewall rules on the customer-managed storage account might block its access, even with correct permissions. To avoid connectivity issues, [switch to managed boot diagnostics](boot-diagnostics.md#enable-boot-diagnostics-on-existing-virtual-machine) (recommended) or remove the firewall on the custom boot diagnostics storage account.
 You don't have the required permissions to use this VM with the serial console. Ensure you have at least Virtual Machine Contributor role permissions.| The serial console access requires you to have contributor level access on your VM or virtual machine scale set. For more information, see the [overview page](serial-console-overview.md).
 The storage account '' used for boot diagnostics on this VM couldn't be found. Verify that boot diagnostics is enabled for this VM, this storage account has not been deleted, and you have access to this storage account. | Double check that you have not deleted the boot diagnostics storage account for your VM or virtual machine scale set
 The serial console connection to the VM encountered an error: 'Bad Request' (400) | This can happen if your boot diagnostics URI is incorrect. For example, "http://" was used instead of "https://". The boot diagnostics URI can be fixed with this command: `az vm boot-diagnostics enable --name vmName --resource-group rgName --storage https://<storageAccountUri>.blob.core.windows.net/`

support/azure/virtual-machines/windows/serial-console-windows.md

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ By default, all subscriptions have serial console access enabled. You can disabl
 ### Use Serial Console with custom boot diagnostics storage account firewall enabled
 
 > [!CAUTION]
-> There is a known issue where Azure Serial Console might fail to connect when a custom boot diagnostics storage account has firewall restrictions. This issue occurs because Azure Serial Console runs in Microsoft's internal tenant, and firewall rules on the customer-managed storage account might block its access, even with correct permissions.
+> There's a known issue where Azure Serial Console might fail to connect when a custom boot diagnostics storage account has firewall restrictions. This issue occurs because Azure Serial Console runs in Microsoft's internal tenant, and firewall rules on the customer-managed storage account might block its access, even with correct permissions.
 > To avoid connectivity issues, [switch to managed boot diagnostics](boot-diagnostics.md#enable-boot-diagnostics-on-existing-virtual-machine) (recommended) or remove the firewall on the custom boot diagnostics storage account.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]