Update applying-group-policy-power-options.md

Edit review per CI 5506

Author: przlplx

support/azure/virtual-machines/windows/applying-group-policy-power-options.md

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-title: Windows VM startup is stuck on "Applying Group Policy Power Options" in Microsoft Azure
-description: Provides troubleshooting steps for an Azure virtual machine (VM) that is stuck in startup with message, "Applying Group Policy Power Options."
+title: Windows VM Startup is Stuck on "Applying Group Policy Power Options" in Microsoft Azure
+description: Provides troubleshooting steps for an Azure virtual machine (VM) that is stuck in startup and displays "Applying Group Policy Power Options."
 ms.date: 03/03/2025
 author: cwhitley-MSFT 
 ms.author: cwhitley
@@ -17,17 +17,17 @@ This article discusses an issue that causes a Microsoft Azure virtual machine (V
 
 ## Symptoms
 
-A Windows VM doesn't start. When you use [Boot diagnostics](./boot-diagnostics.md) to view the screenshot of the VM, you see that the Windows operating system displays the message, **Applying Group Policy Power Options policy**.
+A Windows VM doesn't start. When you use [Boot diagnostics](./boot-diagnostics.md) to view a screenshot of the VM, you see that the Windows operating system displays the message, **Applying Group Policy Power Options policy**.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/applying-group-policy-power-options-policy/ApplyingGroupPolicyPowerOptions.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Windows operating system displaying the message, 'Applying Group Policy Power Options policy'.":::
 ## Cause
 
 Further investigation is required to determine the specific cause of this issue.
 
-## Collect memory dump for troubleshooting
+## Collect dump file for troubleshooting
 
-For this scenario, Azure Support requires a memory dump in order to be able to troubleshoot and diagnose the issue.
+If you experience this error, Azure Support requires a memory dump file in order to troubleshoot and diagnose the issue.
 
-Follow the steps in [this article](./collect-os-memory-dump-file.md) to collect a memory dump. Then, [create a support request](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/overview?DMC=troubleshoot).
+Follow the steps in [this article](./collect-os-memory-dump-file.md) to collect a memory dump file. Then, [create a support request](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/overview?DMC=troubleshoot).
 
-[!INCLUDE [Azure Help Support](../../../includes/azure-help-support.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [Azure Help Support](../../../includes/azure-help-support.md)]