Merge pull request #811 from fbsolo-ms1/document-freshness-maintenance

Remove PII from the .PNG file . . .

Author: AnnaMHuff

articles/machine-learning/data-science-virtual-machine/dsvm-tutorial-resource-manager.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.custom: subject-armqs, mode-arm, devx-track-arm-template
 
 # Quickstart: Create an Ubuntu Data Science Virtual Machine using an ARM template
 
-This quickstart shows how to create an Ubuntu Data Science Virtual Machine (DSVM) using an Azure Resource Manager template (ARM template). A Data Science Virtual Machines is a cloud-based resource, preloaded with a suite of data science and machine learning frameworks and tools. When deployed on GPU-powered compute resources, all tools and libraries are configured to use the GPU.
+This quickstart shows how to create an Ubuntu Data Science Virtual Machine (DSVM) using an Azure Resource Manager template (ARM template). A Data Science Virtual Machine is a cloud-based resource, preloaded with a suite of data science and machine learning frameworks and tools. When deployed on GPU-powered compute resources, all tools and libraries are configured to use the GPU.
 
 [!INCLUDE [About Azure Resource Manager](~/reusable-content/ce-skilling/azure/includes/resource-manager-quickstart-introduction.md)]
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ If your environment meets the prerequisites and you know how to use ARM template
 
 * An Azure subscription. If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/services/machine-learning/) before you begin.
 
-* To use the CLI commands in this document from your **local environment**, you need the [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli).
+* You need the [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli) to use the CLI commands in this document from your **local environment**.
 
 ## Review the template
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ The template defines these resources:
 
 ## Deploy the template
 
-To use the template from the Azure CLI, sign in and choose your subscription (See [Sign in with Azure CLI](/cli/azure/authenticate-azure-cli)). Then run:
+To use the template from the Azure CLI, sign in and choose your subscription. Visit [Sign in with Azure CLI](/cli/azure/authenticate-azure-cli) for more information. Then run:
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 read -p "Enter the name of the resource group to create:" resourceGroupName &&
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ This displays the Resource Group information:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/dsvm-tutorial-resource-manager/resource-group-home.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing a basic Resource Group containing a DSVM":::
 
-Select the Virtual Machine resource to go to its information page. Here you can find information about the VM, including connection details.
+Select the Virtual Machine resource to go to its information page. Here, you can find information about the VM, including connection details.
 
 ## Clean up resources