Fix typos in Azure ML release notes 1.59.0

Author: johnshalem890

articles/machine-learning/v1/azure-machine-learning-release-notes.md

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 ## 2024-11-12
 ### Azure Machine Learning SDK for Python v1.59.0
-Support onnx 1.17.0 to avoid security vulnerability
-Fixed mlflow model conda definition for ai-ml-automl-gpu environment, resolving endpoint deployment issues for models based on ai-ml-automl-gpu
+Support for onnx 1.17.0 to address a security vulnerability.
+Fixed mlflow model conda definition for the ai-ml-automl-gpu environment, resolving deployment issues for models.
 
 ## 2024-10-18
 ### Azure Machine Learning SDK for Python v1.58.0