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Author: PatrickFarley

articles/ai-services/computer-vision/spatial-analysis-zone-line-placement.md

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 ### Example of a well-shaped zone
 
-The zone should be big enough to accommodate three people standing along each edge and focused on the area of interest. Spatial Analysis will identify people whose feet are placed in the zone, so when drawing zones on the 2D image, imagine the zone as a carpet laying on the floor.
+The zone should be large enough to accommodate three people standing along each edge and focused on the area of interest. Spatial Analysis identifies people whose feet are placed in the zone, so when drawing zones on the 2D image, imagine the zone as a carpet laying on the floor.
 
 ![Well-shaped zone](./media/spatial-analysis/zone-good-example.png)
 
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 ### Example of a well-shaped line
 
-The line should be long enough to accommodate the entire entrance. Spatial Analysis will identify people whose feet cross the line, so when drawing lines on the 2D image imagine you're drawing them as if they lie on the floor. 
+The line should be long enough to accommodate the entire entrance. Spatial Analysis identifies people whose feet cross the line, so when drawing lines on the 2D image imagine you're drawing them as if they lie on the floor. 
 
-If possible, extend the line wider than the actual entrance. If this will not result in extra crossings (as in the image below when the line is against a wall) then extend it.
+If possible, extend the line wider than the actual entrance. If this won't result in extra crossings (as in the image below when the line is against a wall) then extend it.
 
 ![Well-shaped line](./media/spatial-analysis/zone-line-good-example.png)