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Author: Blackmist

articles/machine-learning/includes/machine-learning-cli-v1-deprecation.md

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 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Some of the Azure CLI commands in this article use the `azure-cli-ml`, or v1, extension for Azure Machine Learning. Support for the v1 extension will end on September 30, 2025. You will be able to install and use the v1 extension until that date.
+> Some of the Azure CLI commands in this article use the `azure-cli-ml`, or v1, extension for Azure Machine Learning. Support for the v1 extension will end on September 30, 2025. You're able to install and use the v1 extension until that date.
 >
-> We recommend that you transition to the `ml`, or v2, extension before September 30, 2025. For more information on the v2 extension, see [Azure ML CLI extension and Python SDK v2](../concept-v2.md).
+> We recommend that you transition to the `ml`, or v2, extension before September 30, 2025. For more information on the v2 extension, see [Azure Machine Learning CLI extension and Python SDK v2](../concept-v2.md).

articles/machine-learning/includes/recommended-network-outbound.md

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 > [!NOTE]
-> This is not a complete list of the hosts required for all Python resources on the internet, only the most commonly used. For example, if you need access to a GitHub repository or other host, you must identify and add the required hosts for that scenario.
+> The following list doesn't contain all of the hosts required for all Python resources on the internet, only the most commonly used. For example, if you need access to a GitHub repository or other host, you must identify and add the required hosts for that scenario.
 
 | __Host name__ | __Purpose__ |
 | ---- | ---- |