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Author: ktoliver

articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-arm-template.md

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ ms.date: 02/16/2023
 
 ## Create a server that has public access
 
-Create an **azuredeploy.json** file with the following content to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance using public access connectivity method and also create a database on the server. Update the **firewallRules** default value if needed.
+Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance using public access connectivity method and also create a database on the server. Update the **firewallRules** default value if needed.
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible
         "MemoryOptimized"
       ],
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "The tier of the particular SKU. High Availability is available only for GeneralPurpose and MemoryOptimized sku."
+        "description": "The tier of the specific SKU. High availability is available only for GeneralPurpose and MemoryOptimized SKUs."
       }
     },
     "version": {
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible
       "type": "string",
       "defaultValue": "1",
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "Availability Zone information of the server. (Leave blank for No Preference)."
+        "description": "The availability zone information of the server. (If you have no preference, leave blank.)"
       }
     },
     "haEnabled": {
@@ -333,14 +333,14 @@ Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible
         "ZoneRedundant"
       ],
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "High availability mode for a server : Disabled, SameZone, or ZoneRedundant"
+        "description": "High availability mode for a server: Disabled, SameZone, or ZoneRedundant"
       }
     },
     "standbyAvailabilityZone": {
       "type": "string",
       "defaultValue": "2",
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "Availability zone of the standby server."
+        "description": "The availability zone of the standby server."
       }
     },
     "storageSizeGB": {
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible
       "type": "string",
       "defaultValue": "Standard_B1ms",
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "The name of the sku, e.g. Standard_D32ds_v4."
+        "description": "The name of the SKU. For example, Standard_D32ds_v4."
       }
     },
     "backupRetentionDays": {
@@ -486,16 +486,16 @@ Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible
 
 ## Deploy the template
 
-Deploy the JSON file using either Azure CLI or Azure PowerShell.
+Deploy the JSON file by using either the Azure CLI or Azure PowerShell.
 
-# [CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group create --name exampleRG --location eastus
 az deployment group create --resource-group exampleRG --template-file azuredeploy.json
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 New-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG -Location eastus
@@ -504,52 +504,46 @@ New-AzResourceGroupDeployment -ResourceGroupName exampleRG -TemplateFile azurede
 
 ---
 
-Follow the instructions to enter the parameter values. When the deployment finishes, you should see a message indicating the deployment succeeded.
+Complete the steps to enter the parameter values. When the deployment finishes, message indicates a successful deployment.
 
 ## Review deployed resources
 
-Follow these steps to verify if your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance was created in the resource group.
+To verify that your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server was created in the resource group:
 
-# [CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
 
 ```azurecli
 az resource list --resource-group exampleRG
 
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Get-AzResource -ResourceGroupName exampleRG
 ```
+
 ---
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-To delete the resource group and the resources contained in the resource group:
+To delete the resource group and all the resources that are in the resource group:
 
-# [CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group delete --name exampleRG
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Remove-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG
 ```
 
 ---
 
-## Next steps
-
-For a step-by-step tutorial that guides you through the process of creating an ARM template, see:
-
-> [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-> [Tutorial: Create and deploy your first ARM template](../../azure-resource-manager/templates/template-tutorial-create-first-template.md)
-
-For a step-by-step tutorial to build an app with App Service using MySQL, see:
+## Related content
 
-> [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-> [Build a PHP (Laravel) web app with MySQL](tutorial-php-database-app.md)
+- For a step-by-step tutorial that guides you through the process of creating an ARM template, see [Tutorial: Create and deploy your first ARM template](../../azure-resource-manager/templates/template-tutorial-create-first-template.md).
+- For a step-by-step tutorial to build an app by using Azure App Service and MySQL, see [Build a PHP (Laravel) web app with MySQL](tutorial-php-database-app.md).

articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-bicep.md

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ param serverEdition string = 'Burstable'
 ])
 param version string = '8.0.21'
 
-@description('The availability zone information for the server. (For no preference, leave blank.)')
+@description('The availability zone information for the server. (If you don't have a preference, leave blank.)')
 param availabilityZone string = '1'
 
 @description('High availability mode for a server: Disabled, SameZone, or ZoneRedundant.')
@@ -325,14 +325,14 @@ resource database 'Microsoft.DBforMySQL/flexibleServers/databases@2021-12-01-pre
 
 Deploy the Bicep file by using either the Azure CLI or Azure PowerShell.
 
-# [CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group create --name exampleRG --location eastus
 az deployment group create --resource-group exampleRG --template-file main.bicep
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [AzurePowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 New-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG -Location eastus
@@ -347,14 +347,14 @@ Follow the instructions to enter the parameter values. When the deployment finis
 
 Follow these steps to verify if your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance was created in the resource group.
 
-# [CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az resource list --resource-group exampleRG
 
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Get-AzResource -ResourceGroupName exampleRG
@@ -366,13 +366,13 @@ Get-AzResource -ResourceGroupName exampleRG
 
 To delete the resource group and the resources contained in the resource group:
 
-# [CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group delete --name exampleRG
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Remove-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG