Updating text as per developer review

Author: normesta

articles/storage/blobs/immutable-legal-hold-overview.md

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ The **AllowProtectedAppendWritesAll** property setting allows for writing new bl
 > [!NOTE]
 > This property is available only for container-level policies. This property is not available for version-level policies.
 
-This setting also adds the ability to write new blocks to a block blob. The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, some Microsoft applications use internal APIs to create block blobs and then append to them. 
+This setting also adds the ability to write new blocks to a block blob. The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, this property enables Microsoft applications such as Azure Data Factory to append blocks of data by using internal APIs. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append data to blobs.
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/storage/blobs/immutable-policy-configure-container-scope.md

@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ To configure a legal hold on a container with the Azure portal, follow these ste
 
    The **Append blobs** option enables your workloads to add new blocks of data to the end of an append blob by using the [Append Block](/rest/api/storageservices/append-block) operation.
 
-   This setting also adds the ability to write new blocks to a block blob. The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, some Microsoft applications use internal APIs to create block blobs and then append to them. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append blocks to a block blob. 
+   This setting also adds the ability to write new blocks to a block blob. The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, this property enables Microsoft applications such as Azure Data Factory to append blocks of data by using internal APIs. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append data to blobs.
 
    To learn more about these options, see [Allow protected append blobs writes](immutable-legal-hold-overview.md#allow-protected-append-blobs-writes).
 

articles/storage/blobs/immutable-policy-configure-version-scope.md

@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ To configure a default version-level immutability policy for a container in the
 
    The **Append blobs** option enables your workloads to add new blocks of data to the end of an append blob by using the [Append Block](/rest/api/storageservices/append-block) operation.
 
-   The **Block and append blobs** option extends this support by adding the ability to write new blocks to a block blob.  The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, some Microsoft applications use internal APIs to create block blobs and then append to them. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append blocks to a block blob. 
+   The **Block and append blobs** option extends this support by adding the ability to write new blocks to a block blob.  The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, this property enables Microsoft applications such as Azure Data Factory to append blocks of data by using internal APIs. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append data to blobs.
 
    To learn more about these options, see [Allow protected append blobs writes](immutable-time-based-retention-policy-overview.md#allow-protected-append-blobs-writes).
 

articles/storage/blobs/immutable-time-based-retention-policy-overview.md

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Append blobs are comprised of blocks of data and optimized for data append opera
 
 The **AllowProtectedAppendWrites** property setting allows for writing new blocks to an append blob while maintaining immutability protection and compliance. If this setting is enabled, you can create an append blob directly in the policy-protected container and then continue to add new blocks of data to the end of the append blob with the Append Block operation. Only new blocks can be added; any existing blocks cannot be modified or deleted. Enabling this setting does not affect the immutability behavior of block blobs or page blobs. 
 
-The **AllowProtectedAppendWritesAll** property setting provides the same permissions as the **AllowProtectedAppendWrites** property and adds the ability to write new blocks to a block blob. The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, some Microsoft applications use internal APIs to create block blobs and then append to them. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append blocks to a block blob. 
+The **AllowProtectedAppendWritesAll** property setting provides the same permissions as the **AllowProtectedAppendWrites** property and adds the ability to write new blocks to a block blob. The Blob Storage API does not provide a way for applications to do this directly. However, applications can accomplish this by using append and flush methods that are available in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 API. Also, this property enables Microsoft applications such as Azure Data Factory to append blocks of data by using internal APIs. If your workloads depend on any of these tools, then you can use this property to avoid errors that can appear when those tools attempt to append data to blobs.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > This property is available only for container-level policies. This property is not available for version-level policies.