Merge pull request #100134 from marktab/master

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Author: PRMerger15

articles/machine-learning/team-data-science-process/overview.md

@@ -3,20 +3,20 @@ title: What is the Team Data Science Process?
 description: Provides a data science methodology to deliver predictive analytics solutions and intelligent applications.
 services: machine-learning
 author: marktab
-manager: cgronlun
-editor: cgronlun
+manager: marktab
+editor: marktab
 ms.service: machine-learning
 ms.subservice: team-data-science-process
 ms.topic: article
-ms.date: 10/20/2017
+ms.date: 1/04/2020
 ms.author: tdsp
 ms.custom: seodec18, previous-author=deguhath, previous-ms.author=deguhath
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 # What is the Team Data Science Process?
 
-The Team Data Science Process (TDSP) is an agile, iterative data science methodology to deliver predictive analytics solutions and intelligent applications efficiently. TDSP helps improve team collaboration and learning. It contains a distillation of the best practices and structures from Microsoft and others in the industry that facilitate the successful implementation of data science initiatives. The goal is to help companies fully realize the benefits of their analytics program.
+The Team Data Science Process (TDSP) is an agile, iterative data science methodology to deliver predictive analytics solutions and intelligent applications efficiently. TDSP helps improve team collaboration and learning by suggesting how team roles work best together. TDSP includes best practices and structures from Microsoft and other industry leaders to help toward successful implementation of data science initiatives. The goal is to help companies fully realize the benefits of their analytics program.
 
-This article provides an overview of TDSP and its main components. We provide a generic description of the process here that can be implemented with a variety of tools. A more detailed description of the project tasks and roles involved in the lifecycle of the process is provided in additional linked topics. Guidance on how to implement the TDSP using a specific set of Microsoft tools and infrastructure that we use to implement the TDSP in our teams is also provided.
+This article provides an overview of TDSP and its main components. We provide a generic description of the process here that can be implemented with different kinds of tools. A more detailed description of the project tasks and roles involved in the lifecycle of the process is provided in additional linked topics. Guidance on how to implement the TDSP using a specific set of Microsoft tools and infrastructure that we use to implement the TDSP in our teams is also provided.
 
 ## Key components of the TDSP