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articles/purview/catalog-lineage-user-guide.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: chanuengg
 ms.author: csugunan
 ms.service: purview
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 01/20/2022
+ms.date: 09/20/2022
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 # Microsoft Purview Data Catalog lineage user guide
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Data integration and ETL tools can push lineage into Microsoft Purview at execut
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 ### Data storage systems
-Databases & storage solutions such as Oracle, Teradata, and SAP have query engines to transform data using scripting language. Data lineage from views/stored procedures/etc are collected into Microsoft Purview and stitched with lineage from other systems. Lineage is supported for the following data sources via Microsoft Purview data scan. Learn more about the supported lineage scenarios from the respective article.
+Databases & storage solutions such as Oracle, Teradata, and SAP have query engines to transform data using scripting language. Data lineage information from views/stored procedures/etc is collected into Microsoft Purview and stitched with lineage from other systems. Lineage is supported for the following data sources via Microsoft Purview data scan. Learn more about the supported lineage scenarios from the respective article.
 
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 Data process can take one or more input datasets to produce one or more outputs. In Microsoft Purview, column level lineage is available for process nodes.
 
-1. Switch between input and output datasets from a drop down in the columns panel.
+1. Switch between input and output datasets from a drop-down in the columns panel.
 1. Select columns from one or more tables to see the lineage flowing from input dataset to corresponding output dataset.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/catalog-lineage-user-guide/process-column-lineage-inline.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing columns lineage of a process node." lightbox="./media/catalog-lineage-user-guide/process-column-lineage.png":::

articles/purview/concept-data-lineage.md

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 This article provides an overview of data lineage in Microsoft Purview Data Catalog. It also details how data systems can integrate with the catalog to capture lineage of data. Microsoft Purview can capture lineage for data in different parts of your organization's data estate, and at different levels of preparation including:
 
-- Completely raw data staged from various platforms
+- Raw data staged from various platforms
 - Transformed and prepared data
 - Data used by visualization platforms.
 
-## Use Cases
+## Use cases
 
-Data lineage is broadly understood as the lifecycle that spans the data’s origin, and where it moves over time across the data estate. It is used for different kinds of backwards-looking scenarios such as troubleshooting, tracing root cause in data pipelines and debugging. Lineage is also used for data quality analysis, compliance and “what if” scenarios often referred to as impact analysis. Lineage is represented visually to show data moving from source to destination including how the data was transformed. Given the complexity of most enterprise data environments, these views can be hard to understand without doing some consolidation or masking of peripheral data points.
+Data lineage is broadly understood as the lifecycle that spans the data’s origin, and where it moves over time across the data estate. It's used for different kinds of backwards-looking scenarios such as troubleshooting, tracing root cause in data pipelines and debugging. Lineage is also used for data quality analysis, compliance and “what if” scenarios often referred to as impact analysis. Lineage is represented visually to show data moving from source to destination including how the data was transformed. Given the complexity of most enterprise data environments, these views can be hard to understand without doing some consolidation or masking of peripheral data points.
 
 ## Lineage experience in Microsoft Purview Data Catalog
 
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 - Lineage is represented as a graph, typically it contains source and target entities in Data storage systems that are connected by a process invoked by a compute system. 
 - Data systems connect to the data catalog to generate and report a unique object referencing the physical object of the underlying data system for example: SQL Stored procedure, notebooks, and so on.
-- High fidelity lineage with additional metadata like ownership is captured to show the lineage in a human readable format for source & target entities. for example:  lineage at a hive table level instead of partitions or file level.
+- High fidelity lineage with other metadata like ownership is captured to show the lineage in a human readable format for source & target entities. for example:  lineage at a hive table level instead of partitions or file level.
 
 ### Column or attribute level lineage