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Author: Venkat Yalla

articles/iot-operations/connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-fabric-rti.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ To send data to Microsoft Fabric Real-Time Intelligence from Azure IoT Operation
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- An instance of [Azure IoT Operations](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations.md)
+- An [Azure IoT Operations](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations.md) instance
 - A [configured dataflow profile](howto-configure-dataflow-profile.md)
 - [Create a Fabric workspace](/fabric/get-started/create-workspaces). The default *my workspace* isn't supported.
 - [Create an Event Stream](/fabric/real-time-intelligence/event-streams/create-manage-an-eventstream#create-an-eventstream)
@@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ To send data to Microsoft Fabric Real-Time Intelligence from Azure IoT Operation
 > Event Stream supports multiple input sources including Azure Event Hubs. If you have an existing dataflow to Azure Event Hubs, you can bring that into Fabric as shown in the [Quickstart](../get-started-end-to-end-sample/quickstart-get-insights.md#ingest-data-into-real-time-intelligence). This article shows you how to flow real-time data directly into Microsoft Fabric without any other hops in between.
 
 ## Retrieve Custom Endpoint connection details
-Note the [Kafka-compatible connection details for the Custom Endpoint](/fabric/real-time-intelligence/event-streams/add-source-custom-app#kafka). You will need:
+Note the [Kafka-compatible connection details for the Custom Endpoint](/fabric/real-time-intelligence/event-streams/add-source-custom-app#kafka). You need:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/howto-configure-fabric-rti/event-stream-kafka.png" alt-text="Screenshot in Micrsoft Fabric that has the Custom Endpoint connection details":::
 
 #### Hostname
 The bootstrap server address is used for the hostname property in Dataflow endpoint. 
 
 #### Topic name
-The Event Hub name is used as the Kafka topic and is of the form *es_xxxxxxx*.
+The event hub name is used as the Kafka topic and is of the form *es_xxxxxxx*.
 
 #### Custom Endpoint connection string
 The connection string looks like:
@@ -45,16 +45,16 @@ The connection string looks like:
 
 ## Create a Microsoft Fabric Real-Time Intelligence dataflow endpoint
 
-To configure a dataflow endpoint for Microsoft Fabric Real-Time Intelligence, you will need to use SASL connection string based authentication. Managed identity support will be added in the future. 
+To configure a dataflow endpoint for Microsoft Fabric Real-Time Intelligence, you need to use Simple Authentication and Security Layer (SASL) based authentication. Managed identity support will be added in the future. 
 
-Azure Key Vault is the recommended way to sync the connection string to the Kubernetes cluster so that it can referenced in the dataflow. [Secure settings](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-enable-secure-settings.md) must be enabled to configure this endpoint using the operations experience Portal.
+Azure Key Vault is the recommended way to sync the connection string to the Kubernetes cluster so that it can be referenced in the dataflow. [Secure settings](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-enable-secure-settings.md) must be enabled to configure this endpoint using the operations experience Portal.
 
 # [Portal](#tab/portal)
 
 1. In the IoT Operations portal, select the **Dataflow endpoints** tab.
 1. Under **Create new dataflow endpoint**, select **Microsoft Fabric Real-Time Intelligence** > **New**.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="media/howto-configure-fabric-rti/event-stream-sasl.png" alt-text="Screenshot using operations experience to create a new Fabric RTI dataflow endpoint.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="media/howto-configure-fabric-rti/event-stream-sasl.png" alt-text="Screenshot using operations experience to create a new Fabric Real-Time Intelligence dataflow endpoint.":::
 
 1. Enter the following settings for the endpoint:
 
@@ -64,25 +64,25 @@ Azure Key Vault is the recommended way to sync the connection string to the Kube
     | Host                  | The hostname of the Event Stream Custom Endpoint in the format `*.servicebus.windows.net:9093`. Use the bootstrap server address noted previously. |
     | Authentication method | *SASL* is the currently the only supported authentication method. |
     | SASL type             | Choose *Plain* |
-    | Synced secret name    | Name of secret that will synced to the Kubernetes cluster. You can choose any name. |
-    | Username reference of token secret | Create a new or choose an existing Key Vault reference. The secret value must be the literal string *$ConnectionString*. It is not an environment variable. |
+    | Synced secret name    | Name of secret that will be synced to the Kubernetes cluster. You can choose any name. |
+    | Username reference of token secret | Create a new or choose an existing Key Vault reference. The secret value must be the literal string *$ConnectionString*. It isn't an environment variable. |
     | Password reference of token secret | Create a new or choose an existing Key Vault reference. The secret value must be the Custom Endpoint connection string noted earlier. |
 
 1. Select **Apply** to provision the endpoint.
 
 # [Bicep](#tab/bicep)
 
-Identical to [SASL instructions for the Event Hubs endpoint](./howto-configure-kafka-endpoint?tabs=bicep#sasl).
+Identical to [SASL instructions for the Event Hubs endpoint](howto-configure-kafka-endpoint?tabs=bicep#sasl).
 
 # [Kubernetes](#tab/kubernetes)
 
-Identical to [SASL instructions for the Event Hubs endpoint](../connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-kafka-endpoint?tabs=kubernetes#sasl).
+Identical to [SASL instructions for the Event Hubs endpoint](connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-kafka-endpoint?tabs=kubernetes#sasl).
 
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 ## Advanced settings
 
-The advanced settings for this endpoint are identical to the [advanced settings for Azure Event Hubs endpoints](../connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-kafka-endpoint#advanced-settings).
+The advanced settings for this endpoint are identical to the [advanced settings for Azure Event Hubs endpoints](connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-kafka-endpoint#advanced-settings).
 
 ## Next steps