changes from partner/PM review

Author: flang-msft

articles/partner-solutions/astronomer/astronomer-create.md

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 # QuickStart: Get started with Apache Airflow on Astro – An Azure Native ISV Service 
 
-In this quickstart, you use the Azure portal and Marketplace to find and create an instance of Apache Airflow on Astro - An Azure Native ISV Service .
+In this quickstart, you use the Azure portal and Marketplace to find and create an instance of Apache Airflow on Astro - An Azure Native ISV Service. Use Apache Airflow on Astro to run data pipelines that power company dashboards, AI, and ML applications.
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+When you install Astro as an Azure Native ISV Service, you manage your Astro resource usage and billing alongside your existing Azure applications. You also get an integration with Microsoft Entra ID for your organization.
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+For more information, see [Install Astro from the Azure Marketplace](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/install-azure).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/partner-solutions/astronomer/astronomer-overview.md

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 ms.date: 02/14/2024
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-# What is Apache Airflow on Astro – An Azure Native ISV Service ?
+# What is Apache Airflow on Astro – An Azure Native ISV Service?
 
 Azure Native ISV Services enable you to easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure. This service is developed and managed together by Microsoft and Astronomer.
 
@@ -33,37 +33,10 @@ Here are the key capabilities provided by the Astro integration:
 ## Find Apache Airflow on Astro - An Azure Native ISV Service
 
 1. Use the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com) to go to Azure Marketplace. Search for _Apache Airflow on Astro - An Azure Native ISV Service_.
-1. Alternatively, you can also find Apache Airflow on Astro – An Azure Native ISV Service in the [Azure portal](https://ms.portal.azure.com/?Azure_Marketplace_Astronomer_assettypeoptions=%7B%22Astronomer%22%3A%7B%22options%22%3A%22%22%7D%7D#browse/Astronomer.Astro%2Forganizations)
-1. Subscribe to the corresponding service. You see a **Create an Astro organization** page open up.
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-## Astronomer resources
-
-To learn more about Astro:
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-- [About Astro](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/astro-architecture)
-- [Astro Features](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/features)
-- [Astro Pricing](https://www.astronomer.io/pricing/)
-
-To get started on Astro:
 
-- [Run your first DAG](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/run-first-dag)
-- [Create a Deployment](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/create-deployment)
-- [Connect Astro to Azure data sources](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/connect-azure)
-- [Develop your Astro Project](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/cli/develop-project)
-- [Deploy DAGs to Astro](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/deploy-code)
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-To learn more about how Astronomer can help your team make the most of Airflow:
-
-- [Astronomer Support Team](https://support.astronomer.io/)
-- [Book Office Hours](https://calendly.com/d/yy2-tvp-xtv/astro-data-engineering-office-hours-ade)
-- [Astronomer Academy](https://academy.astronomer.io/)
-
-If you’re using Apache Airflow with other Azure data services:
+1. Alternatively, you can also find Apache Airflow on Astro – An Azure Native ISV Service in the [Azure portal](https://ms.portal.azure.com/?Azure_Marketplace_Astronomer_assettypeoptions=%7B%22Astronomer%22%3A%7B%22options%22%3A%22%22%7D%7D#browse/Astronomer.Astro%2Forganizations)
 
-- [Create an Azure Blob Storage connection in Airflow](https://docs.astronomer.io/learn/connections/azure-blob-storage)
-- [Run a task in Azure Container Instances with Airflow](https://docs.astronomer.io/learn/airflow-azure-container-instances)
-- [Run an Azure Data Explorer query with Airflow](https://docs.astronomer.io/learn/airflow-azure-data-explorer)
-- [Integrate Airflow with Azure Data Factory](https://docs.astronomer.io/learn/category/azure-data-factory)
+1. Subscribe to the corresponding service. You see a **Create an Astro organization** page open up.
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/partner-solutions/astronomer/astronomer-tools.md

@@ -31,6 +31,7 @@ To get started on Astro:
 - [Connect Astro to Azure data sources](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/connect-azure)
 - [Develop your Astro project](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/cli/develop-project)
 - [Deploy DAGs to Astro](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/deploy-code)
+- [Install Astro from the Azure Marketplace](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/install-azure)
 
 To learn more about how Astronomer can help your team make the most of Airflow:
 

articles/partner-solutions/astronomer/toc.yml

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 - name: Quickstarts
   expanded: true
   items:
-  - name: Create an Apache Airflow on Astro deployment
+  - name: Create an Apache Airflow Deployment on Astro
     href: astronomer-create.md
 - name: How to
   items: